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The New Slave (2)
Author: Aussiegirl
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(Added on May 18, 2006)
(This month 12304 readers) (Total 25445 readers) |
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Jill waited nervously on her knees waiting for her new master.What would he be like? What would he expect of her. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Dryhill
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Apr 30, 2011 |
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A well written story with excellent characterization and plenty of action. The only thing that seemed wrong was you sure that Jill/Jenny would not have gone to the police? You portray a strong willed woman with a clear sense of right and wrong. i really do feel that the police would have beeen her first port of call .... of course that would have ruined a good ending. (9/10)
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his_delilah (GS)
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Feb 7, 2007 |
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O, this story is so well written... It's the first story I have read from beginning to end on this site. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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May 21, 2006 |
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Great Story. I do have two slaves how do not live with me, but serve my needs when I travel. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Aussiegirl1
(Edit) (May 22, 2006)
- Thanks La Toya for your vote and review.
You must have a lot of fun when you travel!
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Aussiegirl1
(Edit) (May 22, 2006)
- Thanks La Toya for your vote and review.
You must have a lot of fun when you travel!
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| Reviewer:
sunshine0221
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May 20, 2006 |
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One of my very favorite authors - always happy to see a new story from Aussiegirl. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Aussiegirl1
(Edit) (May 20, 2006)
- Thank you sunshine (love that name),
I appreciate your comment so much and nice to see a new name on the review page. I'm still amazed at the response my stories have recieved.
I hope you continue to enjoy my stories.
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magnum
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May 19, 2006 |
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Very well written. A nice mixture of erotica and personal interaction. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Aussiegirl1
(Edit) (May 19, 2006)
- Thanks magnum,
I try hard to create stories with a personal touch. Thanks for taking the time to let me know what you thought, I do appreciate it.
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agr8dv8
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May 18, 2006 |
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I like all of your stories very much, and seeing it is from a fellow aussie even better! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Aussiegirl1
(Edit) (May 19, 2006)
- Thank you so much for taking the time to review and vote. I'm glad you are enjoying my stories.
I agree it is great to come across other aussies, there seems to be a few of us around here.
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| Reviewer:
H Dean
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May 18, 2006 |
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First, you wrote this tale with a sort of melancholy that really worked well. It was that tone that drew me to complete the story which was too tame for my tastes. Structurally, there were flaws in the paragraph composition - hardly noticable unless one is a pain in the ass, like I am. As the story goes, I found the tale a bit too easy - there wasn't really enough fight in the girl to start. Also, the ending was illogical to me. I won't throw a spoiler in, but there are very obvious ways out of that predicament. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Aussiegirl1
(Edit) (May 18, 2006)
- thanks mate,
I know the ending was different, but thought i would see what people thought. Could you send me a pm about how you might have ended it, would be interesting to hear another idea.
thanks again for taking the time to vote.
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H Dean
(Edit) (May 18, 2006)
- Now you're asking me to think? What is the world coming to?
- Replied by:
Aussiegirl1
(Edit) (May 19, 2006)
- Life is tough, I know!
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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May 18, 2006 |
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your wrtiings continue to get better keep up the great work (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Aussiegirl1
(Edit) (May 18, 2006)
- Thanks for the vote and for taking the time to read the correct version of the story.
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