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The Dance
Author: Night Owl
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(Added on Jun 6, 2006)
(This month 13680 readers) (Total 34831 readers) |
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This was my very first attempt in writing a story, based on a fantasy I once had as a teenager. It\'s about my three favorite subjects: abduction, bondage and tickling! I\'ve also used passages from this story in other stories I\'ve written since then, so you may find some similarities. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jun 26, 2010 |
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Good, rather sinister short, showing indeed a darker side to an otherwise everyday personality.
Good writing.
JJ (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
StillBehindBlueEyes
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Nov 17, 2007 |
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Yummmy! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Night Owl
(Edit) (Nov 19, 2007)
- Just wanted to thank "Blue Eyes" and everyone else on this page for their reviews, and offer my apologies for not responding sooner. This story has always been my personal favorite.
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dennisthmn
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Apr 29, 2007 |
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extremely good story (10/10)
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jip
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Sep 25, 2006 |
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Tickling can be very sensual. She will certainly want more... (8/10)
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Widget
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Jul 6, 2006 |
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I really liked the way you used an not so conventional method such as tickling as your stories focus. I also liked the way you ended this so that you wonder if she is saved or.... (9/10)
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castle2001
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Jun 11, 2006 |
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Superbly crafted. (9/10)
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isabeau
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Jun 8, 2006 |
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ahh i read this story on feathery's emporium and loved it..i love bondage and also tickling combined, and kidnapping scenarios are always a favorite of mine also..very well written..and very erotic as well.. some people in the bdsm community scoff at tickling, yet it can be real torture if the person is horribly ticklish.
isabeau (9/10)
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