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Seraphima
Author: Eve Adorer
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(Added on Jul 14, 2006)
(This month 40623 readers) (Total 64276 readers) |
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If next door was a convent, then eighteen-year-old Seraphima was just ‘the girl next door’. Like all young girls, Seraphima was compelled by the mysterious wonder between her legs. As her story begins, the question of the moment is, what is Seraphima, a convent girl, doing in the ‘Poolside Bar’? |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jul 18, 2006 |
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Well, what can I say... I simply am an aficionado of this writing style. To me it is sheer poetry.
The story complicated? Not at all. The story is very simple in fact. It is the writing that is complicated.
But that's why we have to read it...
Tho the story ends a wee bit abruptly, I still whip out my double-digit score-card...
Thank you, once more, for the effort, EveAdorer
JJ (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
jip
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Jul 17, 2006 |
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Rather complicated story. Difficult to follow. (6/10)
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- Replied by:
Eve Adorer
(Edit) (Oct 6, 2006)
- Thank you for your review. Sorry the story is / was not to your taste. I write for fun and enjoy spinning words. Sometimes it gets out of control perhaps, but that's half the joy of it for me. Thanks again.
EA
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