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The Perfect Vengeance Fuck Plot
Author: Haelix
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(Added on Jul 16, 2006)
(This month 76539 readers) (Total 186974 readers) |
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I caught my friend Scott fucking my girlfriend. Instead of busting into the room swinging, I\'ll exact my revenge in the most hurtful, soul-destroying way possible. Thru kidnapping his young sister while he\'s away for a week, I\'m going to break her and her friend, turn them into complete whores, then somehow get him to unknowingly fuck his sister on tape. I figure after politely sending him the tapes, he\'ll come to his own end in time. Eye for an eye. Pussy for a pussy I say. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Ciher
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Feb 28, 2008 |
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Great story! Love how it's written and can not wait for the next part. (9/10)
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frogscookie
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Oct 26, 2007 |
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i love it please keep it coming. (10/10)
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slave-nia
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Sep 20, 2007 |
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very good story, top marks. i hope theres more soon. I'd love to find out what happens. The author must have a wonderful mind. (10/10)
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Piers
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Sep 19, 2007 |
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Good story line, keep it up. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
yuki_ciara_delkynson
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Sep 17, 2007 |
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i really enjoyed reading your story. its like im was reading his journal or something but i loved it. i really got to know Drew and it makes him real and you want him to get away with what hes doing. i cant wait to read the next chapter (9/10)
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bmtphoenix
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Sep 14, 2007 |
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WOW! Excellent, excellent story, and hilarious to boot. MORE MORE MORE!!! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
oldwino
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Jul 17, 2006 |
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Good start to what promise to be a very nasty hot slave training degraging sluts story.
My gf would to read of extreme forced public exhibition and humiiating sex by the girls.
Don't forget cameras and the internet. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jul 16, 2006 |
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exellent so far, can't wair for more (8/10)
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diem
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Jul 16, 2006 |
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looking forward to the next chapter. Some punishment for the girlfriend might be appropriate. (7/10)
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tbear4759
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Jul 16, 2006 |
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an interesting idea for a story. I am wondering how someone who and I quote." We had them seated at heavy, wooden kitchen chairs and I put a decent length of rope thru each of their elbow restraints and tied them to the chairs for extra insurance. " can just jump up and run for the door. can't wait for more.
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csr
(Edit) (Oct 2, 2007)
- Check again:
-next line: "They weren’t tied to the chair other than that length of rope connecting their elbow restraints to the chair."
then: "Close enough to breathe hot air and fog the door’s window pane, the rope ran out and she snapped back hard..."
It works.
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J's blu
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Jul 16, 2006 |
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i really enjoyed the style of writing. fast paced, suited the main character down to the ground. he has some classic sayings - i am looking forward to more of his 'twisted sense of pay back' adventures.
respectfully blu (8/10)
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