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The Firm
Author: JensenDenmark
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(Added on Aug 4, 2006)
(This month 9173 readers) (Total 20221 readers) |
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Some toughts made by a underpaid employee |
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Average (?):  (2/10) |
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| Reviewer:
C_Lakewood
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Aug 10, 2006 |
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This is not the worst story I've read here, but
it's close. (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
jip
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Aug 5, 2006 |
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Even when I'm rather flexible on grammar, spelling and sentence structure, and when I generally defend non -english speaking people, I fear I have to agree with the other reviewers.
What bother me most is the sory itself... it is quite puzzled! (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
ElectricBadger
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Aug 5, 2006 |
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Appreciate the effort, but stick to your native language for publication. Beyond this, the plot was confused and the description haphazard...the entire thing left me completely confused about what had happened. Again, good try and I completely respect the courage it takes to post a story, but I have to recommend a lot more work on language and technical skills before anyone reads your work for enjoyment. (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
dnagirl
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Aug 4, 2006 |
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more like a bad poem than a story (1/10)
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willman
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Aug 4, 2006 |
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The worst writing I have ever seen. No plot (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
CommieCowboy
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Aug 4, 2006 |
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What the Hell happened? Most Dutch and Norse people I've talked to are quite fluent in the English language. I can even think of a certain hot semi-goth Finnish exchange student from back in high school more literate in my native tongue than 3/4 of my Canadian classmates. :-P Sadly, she got sent home early because she was an anarcho-socialist and couldn't get along with her conservative Catholic exchange parents. (1/10)
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mkemse
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Aug 4, 2006 |
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not worth the time to read beyond the first sentence (1/10)
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heycarrieanne
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Aug 4, 2006 |
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Well, it is very obvious that English is not your native tongue. Your spelling is bad as is your grammar, but the main problem is that you have no guts to your story. You need to explain and flesh out your characters so that the readers get a feel for them. (2/10)
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Rocky
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Aug 4, 2006 |
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I honestly hope English is not your native language, and even then, that you've had no formal training in English. FYI, the things that fly in the air are "planes," not "plains." Other than that, I couldn't figure out what you were trying to say in half the sentences. Find a translator! (1/10)
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