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Blackmailed For Wife's Crimes
Author: SEVERUSMAX
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(Added on Aug 15, 2006)
(This month 11823 readers) (Total 23448 readers) |
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A Dutch psychologist is blackmailed by his wife's boss, an Englishwoman, into being her sex slave and the office stud. Her leverage is his wife's embezzlement from the firm |
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Average (?):  (4.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
wistan
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Aug 17, 2006 |
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A bit of a cliche setup - the idea of an employee being caught stealing has been done a thousand times as the scenario for a domination story, although the fact that it is used to force the criminal's spouse into things is a somewhat original twist. The story would benefit from a bit more exploration of the setup - the boss is making an outrageous demand of the husband, but he accepts it without so much as a word of protest. Had the author taken the time to describe his thoughts and feelings more, it would have improved believability.
I have to say, the use of a foreign accent was a big mistake. I know the intent was probably to add authenticity to a foreign character, but it's simply hard to take lines like "vat would you vant from me" seriously. It would have been far better to simply say the guy spoke with an accent and leave it at that.
For a BDSM story, there isn't much in the way of BDSM. What sex we do get is fairly vanilla, with only threats of more coming at the very end. This was also rather disappointing.
Overall, I wish I could give it a higher rating but the author needs to address some of these problems to make a big improvement. (4/10)
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