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Crossing Diana
Author: Gregsta
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(Added on Aug 16, 2006)
(This month 14062 readers) (Total 26930 readers) |
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A BDSM story of a loving Dom and his sub with a crucifixion twist. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
fantassy
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Sep 4, 2006 |
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great descriptions. The length of the chapters is perfect; of course, I would love to see you add more chapters about these two characters. It was so nice to read a romantic story. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Gregsta
(Edit) (Sep 4, 2006)
- Thanks so much fantassy. Again it is nice to read reviews and get feedback. Next chapter is in the pipe. Thanks again
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| Reviewer:
Millie
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Aug 28, 2006 |
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Another very nice story from you. I thought the length was just right. (8/10)
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bluebutterfly
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Aug 25, 2006 |
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Greg I loved your story :). Have to say it got me going, good thing my kids aren't home right now, lol. Keep up the wonderful writing. bb (8/10)
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MrWonderful
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Aug 22, 2006 |
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I had my short, fat, 55-year-old wife read this story out loud. She was sitting on a stool naked with her hands tied behind her back and a butt plug run up her ass. Every time she finished a sentence containing the word cunt, I stuck my finger in hers. Most erotic. (10/10)
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Timberwolf
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Aug 20, 2006 |
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i thought it was very good. Crucifixion isn't really my thing exactly, but you tell it well and made it very interesting to read. Definitely a reccomendable story. No real complaints about the length from me, because I think there's enough packed in what is there to be entertaining. It's not the size of the boat but the motion on the ocean, and this one's got motion. A fun little piece. (8/10)
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StillBehindBlueEyes
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Aug 20, 2006 |
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I'm glad I finally got over here and read your work. I enjoyed the story. It left me wanting to know more. (7/10)
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Aussiegirl1
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Aug 20, 2006 |
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hey Gregsta,
I thought you did a great job and don't be worried about the length of your stories. If you are happy with a story, that is all that matters.
I must say I was right there in Diana's shoes and felt her fear and excitment. For me, that is what a good erotic story is all about. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
nikita
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Aug 19, 2006 |
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This is the second crucifixtion story I've read. It is well told. Anyone can put themselves in the shoes of the characters because their physical descriptions, if any, are sparse; a good literary technique. With regard to the structure, it is like a recipe that starts out with the basics ingredients and intensifies into a rich, flavorful dish with the addition of a bdsm elements that range from low level to intence, and finally, a romantically lusty ending. It is enjoyable reading for those who like romantic bdsm. I'm not sure it needs additional chapters as it reads like a short story. But he did leave it open to add more if he wanted. (8/10)
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MajesticFae
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Aug 18, 2006 |
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I enjoyed it Gregsta. =) It was a little short and I'd like to see a little more... perhaps about Diana's punishment? =) It was well written and kept me entertained. Kudos. =) (8/10)
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- Replied by:
gregsta
(Edit) (Aug 18, 2006)
- Thanks Fae and the others who have reviewed this to date. I know it is only a short story and that is all it was ever meant to be. Personally I find long stories difficult to read on a screen and I cant justify printing them out most of the time. However, if longer stories are what the reader wants who am I to argue :) I really do enjoy writing so it's no chore to provide more nasty and yummy detail to my stories. Thanks again.
Gregsta
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smokey1957
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Aug 17, 2006 |
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Hi it was worth reading but 1 review with rating 9/10 is a bit much for so an short story . If it would be longer my rating wil be up. this is more for balance . (7/10)
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Sweep
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Aug 16, 2006 |
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Hi - Ireally enjoyed your story. I really like a consensual story and cricifixion but it is unusual to get both in the samr story. My only comlaint is that it wasn't long enough. (9/10)
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