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Finally Free
Author: David
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(Added on Aug 21, 2006)
(This month 15537 readers) (Total 32769 readers) |
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A husband and wife long toying with the idea of a true D/s relationship finally get there after a weekend of hell for him. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
Escritor
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Feb 14, 2009 |
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Good start. I would really like a second part to this story. I would have added a longer introduction of the characters, of their life together. And some spelling and grammar errors could be corrected, especially in the last few paragraphs. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
topsfrombottom
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Aug 22, 2006 |
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MORE. Please. I really like your writing style :)
tfb.. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Millie
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Aug 22, 2006 |
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The storyline was good, not totally original but I enjoyed it. You need to concentrate on proof reading before posting though. The layout and spacing was a bit off. (7/10)
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