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Author: Ninja Turtle
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(Added on Aug 26, 2006)
(This month 94803 readers) (Total 132327 readers) |
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A guy has his girlfriend submit to changes in her body, the changes start of mild but end up extreeme |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
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Highest
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| Reviewer:
MasterAnu
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Sep 9, 2012 |
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Nice story.
Clear elaboration of obedient slave. Everyone will love own such slut.
Some parts need needs more description to enjoy the scenario (6/10)
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JimmyJump
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Jan 22, 2009 |
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A pity Tiffany seems to be a rather inanimate object. Like some doll you wind-up and acts to pre-programmed possibilities of motion. In other words a 2-D cardboard figure, without any thoughts of her own whatsoever. The same goes for everybody in this story, bar the narrator.
Secondly, Tiffany's parents must be called Ray Charles and Stevie Wonder, because they're both as blind as a bat, for not seeing there's defenitely something going on with their daughter.
All in all, this reads like a wish-list of some devious mind, but a plot is hard to find beneath all the rubble.
On the other hand, there's a couple of nice stories to be distilled out of this, but the whole is a mess.
JJ (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
studmaster58
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Oct 6, 2008 |
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Shorter, more concise version, of Cheerleader Picture. Although this is somewhat exaggerated, is a very arousing scenario. (9/10)
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Trues_Doll
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Aug 28, 2006 |
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Well, i have to agree in part with another reviewer here it is unrealistic and unbelievable. i think the writing is only average, and it is extremely hard to get through because it seems lacking in qualities that interest, stimulate, or challenge this reader. (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
pollycoventry
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Aug 27, 2006 |
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love the willing young slut story. it is much like my real life (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Aug 26, 2006 |
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Well, it's a story, albiet quite unrealistic and unbelievable. Not badly written, just hard to get through because it seems so silly. (6/10)
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