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Melody
Author: Switchmaybe
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(Added on Aug 27, 2001)
(This month 20144 readers) (Total 38116 readers) |
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This one is a ficticious tv shoe of the future. We have all seen those Japanese endurance programs in which most of the contestants must be masochistic exhibitionists, so how far will it all go? |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
Rating:  (8.5/10) |
Highest
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Feb 5, 2009 |
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Too much going on in the head of the writer which isn't transferred to the paper. We get a description of Melody, then someone speaks and is referred to as 'she', which, at that moment in the story is rather confusing since the 'she' can only point to Melody, as no other female characters were introduced. This happens a lot during the read.
That the story also reads like one of those simplistic Japanese shows, could be a credit to the writer, but it only adds to the tediousness of the story.
Ow, and I know that auburn hares are pretty rare and that they might look amazing on a beautiful woman, but for fekker's sake, learn to read what you've written, folks.
JJ (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Apr 10, 2004 |
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i had to checkle about the story line, this is a ficticious story in the future of a TV Show, i would assume most of the stories posted here are ficticious (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
kaleun76
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Feb 1, 2004 |
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Its a fascinating story. The plot is well developed, and the tale moves forward easily. It creates a momentary suspension of disbelief that is hard to find in these stories. The interview at the end almost makes it look real. More please (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
kaleun
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Oct 3, 2001 |
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Holy tamales! This is hot. More More More! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
hyphen666
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Aug 29, 2001 |
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Gratuitous violence usually makes readers, myself included, a little to extremely uncomfortable. The author has done an outstanding job of describing the application of severe pain, and in the interview, rationalizing the process. My compliments! (10/10)
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ownedgirl
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Aug 28, 2001 |
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interesting story although it could have used more
creativity for some of the tortures. Enjoyed the
format that the story was presented in (7/10)
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