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Alice\'s Life Changing Experience
Author: Certix
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(Added on Sep 7, 2006)
(This month 31875 readers) (Total 59992 readers) |
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Alice, a 16 year old girl, has been brought up her entire life, isolated on a farm in New Jersey. On her sixteenth birthday, her father has some changes on the purpose of her life from that point onwards |
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Weighed
Average (?): (7/10) |
Average
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Highest
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Reviewer:
heycarrieanne
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Sep 7, 2006 |
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While I appreciated the background information, this was just way too short to score very high. You also several typos. Clean up the next chapters and I will increase my rating. (6/10)
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Reviewer:
mkemse
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Sep 7, 2006 |
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was good to start hope you plan to add more soon (7/10)
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