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Are you sure?
Author: dhyanna
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(Added on Sep 16, 2006)
(This month 24166 readers) (Total 44453 readers) |
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The end of a lifelong search |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
HuManiMal
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Jan 17, 2012 |
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Polish the story and add more pleasure of the willing sacrifice, more toying with her (as in, cuts her breast just a little, then fucks her, then cut off). End piece of cutting her cunt to shreds was too gruesome, a major turn off (and 1 star). (6/10)
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kicksnf
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Jun 15, 2011 |
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SICK & PLAIN DISGUSTING !!! SICK & PLAIN DISGUSTING !!! SICK & PLAIN DISGUSTING !!! SICK & PLAIN DISGUSTING !!! SICK & PLAIN DISGUSTING !!! SICK & PLAIN DISGUSTING !!! SICK & PLAIN DISGUSTING !!! SICK & PLAIN DISGUSTING !!! SICK & PLAIN DISGUSTING !!! SICK & PLAIN DISGUSTING !!! SICK & PLAIN DISGUSTING !! (1/10)
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MrWonderful
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Feb 12, 2007 |
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A lot of action packed into a small space. I knew it was a snuff story, but I was taken aback by all the sadism and violence, perhaps because I knew it was written by a woman. (7/10)
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Mothbrad
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Jan 28, 2007 |
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Fun story on the edge of acceptability - I guess it could be described as the written version of a Dolcett picture, in the sense of it being consensual, outrageously brutal and ultimately fatal. There's a lot to be said for getting to the point, but I'd agree that some more exploration of the characters (at least the abuser, if you wanted to keep the dehumanization of the victim intact) could have helped. A good effort. (7/10)
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Ultraprene
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Dec 21, 2006 |
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The writing is competent, but the acts depicted are so cruel and brutal that the story quenched any erotic fire I might have developed. Of course it's a matter of taste, but stories of people, especially women, being mutilated and murdered really turn me off. (6/10)
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Panplayer
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Dec 4, 2006 |
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Excellent, the pure violence was amazing. (10/10)
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Qmoq
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Oct 12, 2006 |
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Wow! What is your real name anyway? This was very well written - even with all the amazing tortures it was always clear what was happening. Snuff's not my thing, but this was so well written it still "stimulated" me. Q xx (8/10)
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pollycoventry
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Sep 26, 2006 |
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she loves pain thats what is best. i love sexual pain but not real injury (10/10)
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IDCrewDawg
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Sep 19, 2006 |
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Good short story. The development was short, since the story started out in the middle of the activity. I think this could have been a much longer multipule chapter story and allowed for more creative torture. The victimizer in this story I think could develop into a serial type person, or even use an alternate universe where the activity is common.
Enjoyable over all, look forward to more stories by this author.
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ID (8/10)
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Polecat
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Sep 19, 2006 |
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Quite good. The pace was a little too fast for my taste; could have used a little more development, but then it is a short short story, and you cannot do much more in such a short span.
I enjoyed it (7/10)
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ElectricBadger
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Sep 18, 2006 |
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Good quality although brief -- recommended for a quick read (though yes, the codes are not kidding on this one!) (8/10)
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bdanials
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Sep 18, 2006 |
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Quick and to the snuff point. I appreciate the new ideas in this story. (8/10)
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oldtom
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Sep 18, 2006 |
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The method was unique. I like many of the instruments of torture used and the pain/pleasure intermixed thru the whole piece. I know now I have been too easy on my slut
(8/10)
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t.shirt
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Sep 17, 2006 |
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Straight to the point and a bit gory but good idea. Maybe it could be a bit longer too? (6/10)
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Dhys shadow
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Sep 17, 2006 |
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wow........love the urine bag.....very inventive...and it was well written....short and sweet....okay maybe not sweet.........(smiles) (8/10)
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chksng19
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Sep 17, 2006 |
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Whew! quick, harsh and well written. (7/10)
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heycarrieanne
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Sep 16, 2006 |
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This was a little too bloody for me and I normally never read "snuff" stories if I really think someone is going to buy the farm, but I liked your other story so I thought I would take a chance. (7/10)
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