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The Party
Author: Master Matthew
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(Added on Sep 19, 2006)
(This month 12354 readers) (Total 24906 readers) |
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Julie\'s Master invites guests to a party where she will be the entertainment |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 28, 2009 |
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The sentence "The rope was quickly passed through an eye bolt in the ceiling", which you often see in this or that BDSM story, has always intrigued me.
I mean, how fast can someone get a ladder from somewhere in the house, get it set-up under a conveniently placed eyebolt in the ceiling (we all have 'em, don't we?), tripple up the ladder and aim the rope through the bolt's eye, get back down, put the ladder back where it belongs, and then, after what, 5 to 6 minutes, exclaim "have you seen how quick that went?"... Don't think so either, especially when said ceiling could be as high as 20 feet, when living in a small French chateau. In that case, it could take half a day to "quickly pass the rope through an eye bolt in the ceiling", considering you might want to call the local painter because he's the only one in a wider area to have such a long ladder.
Anyway, all kidding aside, I loved this little tale, only because of the deliciousness of Julie, who is splendid in all her submissive glory.
JJ (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
jip
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Sep 25, 2006 |
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Well written, you nearly feel what she is going through. exiting. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
chattel69
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Sep 21, 2006 |
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Very nice, I could imagine myself in her place. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
MasterMatthew
(Edit) (Sep 21, 2006)
- Hi Chattel,
Thanks for the vote and the comments. Its always nice when someone appreciates a story. I'd love to hear which parts you specifically enjoyed and which parts less so. It really helps me to get feedback from different women. Thanks again, Master Matthew
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| Reviewer:
bigcat
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Sep 19, 2006 |
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A wonderfully well written tale that captures the inner tension, conflict and ambivalence of consensual public submission. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
MasterMatthew
(Edit) (Sep 21, 2006)
- Thanks bigcat, That struggle with concensual submission is my favourite thing within bdsm!
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| Reviewer:
yorts6572
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Sep 19, 2006 |
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The plot was well conceived and very plausable. Her feelings were explained wonderfully and the characters and their behavior seemed very real. I can easily visualize myself being there and enjoying the proceedings immensly. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
MasterMatthew
(Edit) (Sep 21, 2006)
- Thanks yorts,
Sometimes I write things that have little relationship with reality, but this was certainly something real. Part of it is from experience, and I certainly enjoyed those proceedings!
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