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Ponyland
Author: Sir Thomas
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(Added on Sep 20, 2006)
(This month 33820 readers) (Total 58984 readers) |
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Life in a ponygirl training facility |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
J's blu
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Sep 21, 2006 |
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hhhmmm, well, the writing was good! and the idea was good. i love pony girl stories, this one just didnt get me hot. i would have liked to see what happened while the girls were at his place. it just seemed to ahve too long a synopsis for a short story, and not enough length for the time span included. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Guiller
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Sep 20, 2006 |
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i liked the setup very much simply too short (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
H Dean
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Sep 20, 2006 |
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Technically, this story was fine. However, this author needs to slow down and enjoy the burn. This tale seemed to have been written very quickly, with little thought to who the characters were or how anything might feel. Consequently, I failed to feel anything. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Sep 20, 2006 |
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the story itself was good, buti found part to seem like the were written by child for lack of a better phrase, the use ofthe word goon also tured me off last timei hear that was years back, (6/10)
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