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Creaming the Creamer
Author: Pagan
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(Added on Sep 7, 2001)
(This month 11182 readers) (Total 26827 readers) |
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They were trying to buy a house and start a new life. The only unexpected thing was there were several men waiting in the house too. |
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Average (?):  (3/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Dec 25, 2006 |
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needs more work then there is space here to list (3/10)
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jbowler65
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Sep 1, 2003 |
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The premise of the story could be interesting, but all the problems with spelling, grammar, and punctuation makes it a very difficult read. (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
LaJan
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Aug 24, 2002 |
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Well, that was hard to read, wasn't it? I agree with the previous review: the story may have been good in the hands of a literate writer but, as it is, this story is an awful read. Too bad, too. The premise is good and the writer's imagination seems interesting. Oh well, maybe the author will improve with time. Until then, I will pass on struggling through any more like this one. Peace. LaJan (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
barkeep
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Sep 13, 2001 |
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I liked the premise, but the author is not a good writer. The spelling, grammar and punctuation mistakes made it hard to read. It would be a good story if someone were to rewrite it. (3/10)
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