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The Exposition of Modified Women
Author: Benfan
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(Added on Oct 17, 2006)
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The reader visits - through the eyes of a dominant male attendee - an exhibition of erotically restrained and modified females. |
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redEva
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Dec 31, 2010 |
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Absolute pleasure! Wonderfully executed set of vignettes painting in words some of the pictures of top artist in genre. I would love to hear more about this fair... (10/10)
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ccarissa
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Loved all but the fpu at the end. It ended the story on a sad note. (9/10)
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mkemse
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Dec 25, 2007 |
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exellent, every element of a great story (10/10)
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bmtphoenix
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Aug 10, 2007 |
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Another excellent story. You're truly one of a kind! Keep it up! (10/10)
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dumboldon
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Mar 4, 2007 |
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Fun...I can"t quite see how the long hours could be done, but I love it!!! (10/10)
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chaomancer
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Nov 15, 2006 |
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Very nice! Thank you for an excellent read. (10/10)
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slaveanita
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Oct 31, 2006 |
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I'm enjoying this a lot. I like the kind of multiple 'shorts' approach to the exposition which allows you to showcase a lot of ideas.
Keep it coming! (9/10)
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heycarrieanne
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Oct 25, 2006 |
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OMG!!! My legs are crossed!!!! What a great story--very well written and very well paced! I can't wait to read more, I think! (10/10)
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nikita
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Oct 21, 2006 |
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I'm entranced. This story will go on my bookshelf. (10/10)
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chksng19
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Oct 17, 2006 |
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Delightful story that grasps one in its clutches and demands continuation. Anxious for much more! (10/10)
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cala
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Oct 17, 2006 |
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As always, your writing is a joy to read. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
cala
(Edit) (Dec 10, 2006)
- Chapter 8 - Marvellous! I wonder if Mr Brandon's business interests also include trains? ...If so, he should consider replacing the Pendolinos with ponies and trap. Timetables could only be improved!
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| Reviewer:
Barbara Anne
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Oct 17, 2006 |
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Incredible imagination! -We look forward to more from this writer. (9/10)
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H Dean
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Oct 17, 2006 |
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As before, your story telling and ideas are top-notch and absurd - perfectly so. Of course, I have already read this piece and the follow-ups. This commentary is just to express the hope that you expand on the ideas a little more. Also, get back to "On the Table". (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Benfan
(Edit) (Oct 17, 2006)
- Heh - thanks. I still expect to finish OtT but have been distracted by all these other ideas.... Maybe once I get some of them out of my head, via the Expo, progress with OtT will come more easily.
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kaykay
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Oct 17, 2006 |
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Wonderful but too short! This definitely leaves the reader wanting more, more, more. The author of On the Table never disappoints, and this delicious little teaser is no exception. Imaginative, beautifully written, top notch. (10/10)
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dennisthmn
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Oct 17, 2006 |
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can't wait for the next chapter (9/10)
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