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Atonement
Author: waterbaby421
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(Added on Oct 19, 2006)
(This month 9620 readers) (Total 17271 readers) |
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Forgiveness must be earned. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
nikita
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Oct 21, 2006 |
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I agree with Alex. She summed up the most important points nicely. The story has feeling, passion in it, and full of heat. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Alex Bragi
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Oct 20, 2006 |
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Nice, really nice.
If I had to criticise this story it would be to say, the number of sentences beginning with "She" became a little repetitive after a while.
Otherwise it's a sexy and sensual read, full of good hot imagery.
(9/10)
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| Reviewer:
HisSub
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Oct 19, 2006 |
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I know the place that is described in this story. I really enjoyed it. (9/10)
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