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Alien Pussycat
Author: Arnold Puttywn
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(Added on Oct 20, 2006)
(This month 17442 readers) (Total 28738 readers) |
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Neela was kidnapped by extraterrestrial slavers and taken to Cygnas to surgical transformation and sale as a pussycat. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
Rating:  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Martiniman
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Jan 16, 2012 |
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I enjoyed this story, but only wished it was a complete story. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
H Dean
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Oct 24, 2006 |
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Frankly, I enjoyed the basic idea behind this story. I've been toying with something along somewhat similar lines. So, this story should have hit the spot. It didn't quite do it, though. The first thing that struck me was the simplicity of the writing. Arnold, I always gripe about your style of writing being a bit on the sophomoric side - it doesn't seem to bother anyone else, so maybe it's just me. The other thing that bothered me was that after the transformation there was nothing to indicate more than mild shock. As with another one of your stories, this character took it all in stride...it was just too easy. This sort of thing should have caused substantial amounts of trauma that it didn't. There was just no human emotion. Really, it was that, more than the style I always complain about, that kept me from really enjoying this tale to its fullest extent. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Rabbit1
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Oct 21, 2006 |
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I was surprised --usually SiFi is not my thing but I like this story ---my hats off to your sir --this one is well writen (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
dragonfly996
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Oct 21, 2006 |
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Good start. Can't wait for more. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
ElectricBadger
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Oct 21, 2006 |
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Very well written. The start was a little cliche, and I'd love to hear a bit more explanation about cygnus v. earth (was it colonized in the past, or what?) and generally a little more explanation of the setting. Following the operation, though, it picked up nicely and flowed a lot better. Good plot, and I look forward to more additions (and hope you don't ignore the fun too much in preference of politics!) (8/10)
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- Replied by:
pttwyn
(Edit) (Oct 21, 2006)
- Thank You for reading my story. The sci-fi part is not important to me nor the story, it just gave me a way to make the modifications. Neela will become important for another reason.
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