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Bedtime
Author: Dirty Old Pervert
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(Added on Nov 5, 2006)
(This month 14719 readers) (Total 30735 readers) |
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This is the story of Jasmine\'s struggle to resist the urge to touch herself. She MUST resist. Horrible things happen to girls who touch themselves. |
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Weighed
Average (?): (8/10) |
Average
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Reviewer:
jip
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Nov 6, 2006 |
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Promising story (8/10)
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Reviewer:
schoolboylv
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Nov 6, 2006 |
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I hope you continue writing this....Very well done! (10/10)
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Reviewer:
chksng19
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Nov 5, 2006 |
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And excellent start (I hope) of something which could grow into a longer tale. Very well told, with rich detailing of the heroine's thoughts and acts. (9/10)
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Reviewer:
Satan_Klaus
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Nov 5, 2006 |
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A very interesting and arousing short story that deserves attention. (8/10)
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