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Legally Binding
Author: Finc
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(Added on Nov 20, 2006)
(This month 15666 readers) (Total 37387 readers) |
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Rich bitch widow does whatever it takes to get her husbands inheritance. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 29, 2009 |
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A good basic idea, sadly, a bit poorly executed. For instance, characters are under-developed. There's too little background detail and the choise of words leaves to be desired.
There's a couple of general descriptions that are totally meaningless, but where a little research could have done wonders.
Like the "south American accent"... there is no such thing, as on the South American continent, they speak several languages. It's either a Portuguese accent, or a Spanish accent, or even an Aztek accent...
Okay effort with okay writing skills. Just.
JJ (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
hisc2003
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Nov 22, 2006 |
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An excellent read, went at a nice, healthy pace - but had a very pleasant twist in the tail./ (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Millie
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Nov 21, 2006 |
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Nicely done, but a few basic errors let you down. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
finc
(Edit) (Nov 22, 2006)
- with my work there will be a few miustakes from time to time. i find writing a very private pursuit and don,t use an editor. i hope that won't put you off reading some of my other tales
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| Reviewer:
crickette
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Nov 20, 2006 |
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I really enjoyed reading your story. I loved the way the characters were developed, completely in step with the plot and storyline. Everyone should have staff so devoted and friends so willing to help! Enjoyed the poetic justice ! I look forward to reading more of your work in the future. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
finc
(Edit) (Nov 22, 2006)
- thanks for the encouragment
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| Reviewer:
JonMaddux
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Nov 20, 2006 |
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I loved the detail and thought the story was well written! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
finc
(Edit) (Nov 22, 2006)
- much appreciated
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