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Special indoctrination unit-captive women
Author: Aceith
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(Added on Nov 20, 2006)
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Aristocratic women who are uncooperative in providing sexual gratification to the dictator are transferred to a special training facility to be molded into fully compliant sex toys |
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Average (?):  (5.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Feb 20, 2008 |
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i liked the gnenral idea of the story but it has nothin to support your theme (5/10)
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- Replied by:
jrnd711
(Edit) (Jun 3, 2012)
- Thanks for your input. I'll keep that in mind and I may add episodes later to improve the story presentation.
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| Reviewer:
SlvTrayner
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Jan 18, 2007 |
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Actually I like your concentration on breaking the women's defenses down using extreme humiliation plus pain, including reluctant anal worship in addition to sperm addiction and anonymous cocksucking. Keep going in this direction and I am sure you will find your rhythm! (7/10)
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- Replied by:
jrnd711
(Edit) (Apr 29, 2008)
- Thanks for your comments, I'm glad you enjoy some of the elements present in the story. If future stories are forthcoming, I'll keep your comments in mind. All the best, Aceith
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| Reviewer:
Lee Boudine
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Nov 21, 2006 |
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Great concept, but lacks imagonation. Too focused on the male issue and front and rear sources of excretia.
There is a wonderful opportunity for the slow humiliation of the aristocratic women from the first touch, the first button, the first exposure. Forced exhibition and orgasms would be interesting,
Finally, coerciopn techniqes......................................
Great concept; but he story does not fulfill expectations. (5/10)
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- Replied by:
jrnd711
(Edit) (Apr 29, 2008)
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- Replied by:
jrnd711
(Edit) (Jun 2, 2012)
- I believe the story has potential and maybe I can add episodes later that will be more satisfying to the reader. I will consider that possibility in the future. Thanks for your input.
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| Reviewer:
dennisthmn
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Nov 21, 2006 |
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could be more about the women i.e. the what they like( better discription) (5/10)
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- Replied by:
jrnd711
(Edit) (Jun 3, 2012)
- You're right and that's important. I'll try to improve in this area if I add more episodes. I appreciate your comments.
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