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The Armoire
Author: Sam Darquesied
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(Added on Dec 5, 2006)
(This month 58889 readers) (Total 100518 readers) |
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Sylvia\'s search for a had crafted armoire leads her to a frightening, life altering, encounter with Sam Darquesied. |
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Average (?):  (10/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 31, 2009 |
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Another story I read quite some time ago, but never reviewed. And what a story it is. One of the best in its genre, with a nice, direct approach while at the same time the start of the 'turnaround' of Sylvia is deliciously portrayed as a 'mistake'. Great stuff.
JJ (10/10)
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jbowler65
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Aug 2, 2008 |
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Thank you very much for an excellent story. It was extremely well written and exciting for us to read. (10/10)
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skullblade
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Jan 13, 2008 |
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I want to say thank you for taking the time and energy to write this story and keep it going the way you do. As far as I am concerned the flow is better then some stories that I have read in published books and look forward to reading more in the future. (10/10)
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kaori82
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Apr 30, 2007 |
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Another top story - thanks for sharing with us. It's great to see that interesting stories can have a consentual theme as well - it's kind of rare here. Please go on this way - at least with this story and keep NC themes for other stories.
I especially like the idea of Sam's business - would be great for real as well ... would love to get an invitation for the next Christmas party ;-)
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Apparently bdsmlibray seems to be dead - at least concerning story updates. In one of your replies you wrote over 2 weeks ago your update of part 8 should be there but until now unfortunately there is nothing - even the main "newest story" page still is on April 11th.
Why don't you additionally go to Leviticus site? I enjoyed it for years. Even after the original owner's death it's updated every 2 weeks, has fewer but higher quality stories than here - in fact many of them fit your stile. Furthermore it's strictly non-commercial. You also don't have the feeling to get viruses etc. there compared to here - bdsm-lib successfully crashed my browser so I always have bad feelings to browse here. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
darquesied
(Edit) (May 3, 2007)
- The new chapter is posted at my own website:
http://www.darquesied.com
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Corinna80
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Apr 12, 2007 |
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Thank you very much for this story - it's one of my favourite here
I loved the theme of Sam's business with his girls. From Harold there is a story "MRI" about the same basic theme here I also like a lot but it's on the darker side with crime and suppression. Your idea of complete consent is what makes your story different.
I believe the latest turn in capter 7 of Sam and Al to go public doesn't fit to the original idea, but I'm still giving 10/10.
I would rather like to read some more about Sam's clients activities (e.g. the story of Kendell wasn't told) and to see some intense "customer" session like the initial one of Sylvia. In part 5 the girls failed to stand their longer session but perhaps they would like to give it another try ;-)
(10/10)
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- Replied by:
darquesied
(Edit) (Apr 12, 2007)
- Thank you for your kind words re The Armoire.
In Bell and Troop A, Belle's seemingly sudden eagerness was simply her survival instincts taking over. Lawrence guessed as much in the letter at the end.
Chapter 8 of The Armoire has been posted and should be available in the next couple of days, although the next chapter may have more of what you are looking for.
Again, thank you for your support.
DS
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christiana{KS}
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Mar 25, 2007 |
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I have enjoyed each chapter of "The Armoire" and continue to look forward to more. You have the rare ability to truly reflect many of the feelings and emotions involved, and not just the phsyical descriptions that make us all enjoy it just as much. Kudos for such great writing. I hope we continue to see more work from you! (10/10)
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Snark
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Mar 9, 2007 |
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Sam:
Excellent, excellent work. Very much what most of us frequent this site to find. Looking forward to other stories and more chapters. Fine descriptions, good suspense, minimal suspension of disbelief required. And sexy as hell!
Sorry for the delay...life happens! As you have continued to add superb chapters to an already excellent story, I'll have to say that a 10 is likely just around the corner. The only 10 I've given was for a story that was more intense, but not nearly as tenderly written. I'm considering giving this one to my spouse. It's that well done. I'm anxiously awaiting the next episode. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
darquesied
(Edit) (Jan 23, 2007)
- I thank you for your vote and kind words. Ch4 should be up soon. It details the origins the ranch.
PS
What would it have taken to get a perfect 10 vote?
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darquesied
(Edit) (Jan 23, 2007)
- I thank you for your vote and kind words. Ch4 should be up soon. It details the origins the ranch.
PS
What would it have taken to get a perfect 10 vote?
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Snark
(Edit) (Mar 17, 2007)
- BRAVO! Sam. Excellent imaginative expresion. Given the story thus far, the multiple plot twists don't strain credulity. While I've never watched a survival "reality show", this one I'd pay to see. The insights within the descriptions support the story line well. Hopefully in the next chapter "Fat Pig" will get his real reward.
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darquesied
(Edit) (Mar 17, 2007)
- Happy to see you're sticking with me. The next chapter is going to ask for some help from readers such as yourself.
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GuiltyKarma
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Mar 1, 2007 |
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Excellent story, I love the characters and their actions. Keep up the great work!! (10/10)
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Trues_Doll
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Jan 25, 2007 |
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This is just about the best i have read on this site! A fantastic tale that is well written...the pace is incredible...a wonderful piece of work, simply wonderful! ~ann~ Master True's doll (10/10)
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cala
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Jan 25, 2007 |
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A highly enjoyable read, with a better than average standard of writing. I really look forward to more stories from this author. ........EDIT: Score change on reading CH 3. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
darquesied
(Edit) (Jan 16, 2007)
- Glad you enjoyed it. See reply to NateInPhilly for info on upcoming chapters. Also Belle and Troop A.
DS
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chksng19
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Jan 25, 2007 |
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The more you have added to this piece, the better it gets; your writing style is easily readable and very enjoyable in content. The only suggestion I would have for you is "MORE!!!!" (10/10)
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J's blu
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Jan 18, 2007 |
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all i can say is thank You. this story made me hot and wet yes. but i cried for Sam, and i laughed at His driving ability. how do i get on the invite list for next years party, please?
blu (10/10)
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- Replied by:
darquesied
(Edit) (Jan 18, 2007)
- You're welcome, and thank you for the vote! The next installement is a prequel of sorts, about how it all got started. Oh, to both you and Claire, Sam is unable to take on any new clients at this time... sorry.
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J's blu
(Edit) (Jan 27, 2007)
- *pouting just a little* in my secret heart, i hope this is sort of auto-biographical. just the thought that this could really be Your life, makes me all mushy. and so now i wait until You can post more wonderful stories about Your girls.
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J's blu
(Edit) (Mar 16, 2007)
- LMAO well Sir, are You insinuating that most people who delve into the world of Master/slave have NO IDEA what a 'good' Master is? well done Sir, well done!! i am just enjoying this series so much!! You realise of course that You have ruined a whole lot of slaves for most MAsters? i mean who can compete with Tommy? *sighs wishfully*
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darquesied
(Edit) (Mar 16, 2007)
- Glad you're sticking with me. Next chapter will actually be looking for some help from readers like you (you'll see).
Tommy has learned over the years that his girl is a rare gift rather than a possession and that has proven to be very gratifying, both emotionally and--hands down--sexually!
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J's blu
(Edit) (May 6, 2007)
- *finishes reading latest chapter, calms down, comes to reviews, thinks hwat am i supposed to be emailing about???? goes back to beginning of chapter*
thank You Sam Sir for more visits to Tommy and Alysa, and i am hunting through my music collection right now! will get back to You asap.
:) blu
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J's blu
(Edit) (Jul 10, 2007)
- it would seem superfluous to add more praise, but i cannot let another wonderful chapter in Tommy and alysa's story go unnoted, and i eagerly await the upcomming story of the the reluctant police lady. thank You again.
blu
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Claire
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Jan 7, 2007 |
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Ah - if only I $5000 and the phone number for the ranch! This is definately one of the best stories on this site. You make it seem real. You keep the tension of the story rising and falling just as Sam does in his sessions. I am eagerly anticipating part 3. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
darquesied
(Edit) (Jan 16, 2007)
- Appreciate your encouragement. Chapter 3 (The Christmas party) will be posted by the end of January.
DS
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Curtis
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Dec 12, 2006 |
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Super story, just a couple of typos or misspellings. And I'll bite — what WAS 'Chicago' about? (9/10)
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- Replied by:
darquesied
(Edit) (Jan 16, 2007)
- Thanks for the review. What spelung erurs? See chapter 2 (the Hurdles) re 'Chicago'.
DS
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| Reviewer:
darebak
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Dec 8, 2006 |
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Really well written ... like a roller coaster ride where you peak just as the victim peaks and then it starts all over again. Looking forward to the next chapter or other stories. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
darquesied
(Edit) (Jan 16, 2007)
- Thanks for the kudos and the vote. See reply to NateInPhilly for info on upcoming chapters.
DS
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| Reviewer:
azrlg17
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Dec 7, 2006 |
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Great 1st chapter. I would love to know how she gets back at Kristel. Please don't make it easy on her. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
darquesied
(Edit) (Jan 16, 2007)
- Thanks for the vote. See chapter 3 (The Christmas Party) for more on Kristel.
DS
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| Reviewer:
Rmmmj
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Dec 6, 2006 |
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Absolutley wonderful. There are so many stories out there that start Safe, Sane, Consensual and end with Sordid, Selfish and Coerced. This one started non-consensual but you must read it. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
darquesied
(Edit) (Jan 16, 2007)
- Thanks for taking the time to review and vote. Theres more to come and I would value your input on the addition chapters.
DS
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| Reviewer:
NateInPhilly
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Dec 5, 2006 |
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An extremely good writer with heart and realism. I look forward to reading more. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
darquesied
(Edit) (Jan 16, 2007)
- Thank you for your kind words. Chapter two (The Hurdles) was posted at the end of December and chapter 3 (The Christmas Party) should be posted by the end of January.
DS
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