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The Pleasure Machine
Author: Sam Darquesied
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(Added on Jan 29, 2007)
(This month 28848 readers) (Total 55274 readers) |
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Emily discovers a very, very delightful machine at a small town garage sale. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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mkemse
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Mar 7, 2007 |
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very, very hot (9/10)
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Elkor
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Feb 13, 2007 |
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Good start, nice plot line, good characters. (9/10)
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chksng19
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Feb 6, 2007 |
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A nice story; just enough plot, just enough character, just enough action. Very well done, congrats! (10/10)
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lt0069
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Feb 5, 2007 |
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Well written.I enjoyed the story.I'm waiting for the next chapter. (7/10)
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StephVE
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Feb 3, 2007 |
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An excellent short vignette. Clever idea and great story development. the story moves weel and the concepts are clear. Very professional and recomended. (9/10)
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dragonfly996
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Jan 31, 2007 |
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Preferred the end...can't wait for the next adventure...Thanks (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
J's blu
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Jan 30, 2007 |
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after reading the authors other stories, i feel as though this posting is not the final draft. the story premise is good, it just doesnt seem as well finished as usual.
respectfully, blu (7/10)
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- Replied by:
darquesied
(Edit) (Jan 30, 2007)
- There was obviously some problem with the post. The file appears corrupted. I have resubmitted and hopefully they will post the properly formatted text ASAP.
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bdanials
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Jan 30, 2007 |
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Overall well developed and a very enjoyable read. I wish some formatting was done to remove the random special characters from the story which make it a bit difficult to read at times (this is a formatting issue, not an issue with the story). (7/10)
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- Replied by:
darquesied
(Edit) (Jan 30, 2007)
- There was obviously some problem with the post. The file appears corrupted. I have resubmitted and hopefully they will post the properly formatted text ASAP.
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| Reviewer:
Lee Boudine
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Jan 29, 2007 |
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The lick of editing made parts of the story difficult to read and detracted from the erotic quality. Over all it was imaginative and well developed. I enjoyed reading it once, but will probably not read it a second time. I would read a sequel. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
darquesied
(Edit) (Jan 30, 2007)
- There was obviously some problem with the post. The file appears corrupted. I have resubmitted and hopefully they will post the properly formatted text ASAP.
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