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Weighed
Average (?): (5/10) |
Average
Rating: (4.5/10) |
Highest
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Lowest
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Reviewer:
Domination King
(Edit) |
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Jul 12, 2008 |
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You'll have to forgive the rating..as I have not actually read your story. My comment is about the title. "A Pirate's Life for Me." is the title of a story I have written, and is posted on this site as well. In my opinion, if you had known about this beforehand, it'd be (in the immortal words of Captain Hook.) Bad Form to duplicate the title. Just my two cents. (3/10)
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Reviewer:
mlyniam
(Edit) |
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Apr 1, 2007 |
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Story idea is good, but the spelling and grammar need work. (5/10)
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Reviewer:
DeGrinch
(Edit) |
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Jan 31, 2007 |
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The story isn't bad, although, the main character could be explained a bit more, perhaps this will happen as the story unfolds. The bigest problem is with proof reading/correction. There didn't seem to be any. Many cases of 'see' when 'she' was ment etc. makes it hard to read. (5/10)
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Reviewer:
Lee Boudine
(Edit) |
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Jan 29, 2007 |
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Short and sweet: it is like the author ejaculated too soon. More detail and "foreplay" would have been appreciated by this reader. It could be developed into a very fine story with patience. (5/10)
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