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The Auction Block
Author: Jlou
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(Added on Feb 3, 2007)
(This month 238403 readers) (Total 435502 readers) |
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Two beautiful sisters are kidnapped by a diabolical white slavery ring and forcibly converted into lesbian slaves. They are then trained and prepared for sale for an exclusive auction featuring some of the world\'s wealthiest lesbian slaveholders. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
tellmeyourstory
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Jun 25, 2016 |
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This was an extremely well done story! The plight of the two sisters made this unique and brought a human quality to the characters, especially the sisters, than is typical for most BDSM stories.
Also, the lesbian sex was hot, especially that they were forced into becoming lesbians, that their sex drive was heightened, and thatbthey were forced to endure the delicious cruelty of orgasm denial. Great job!
(Only recommendation is to have it edited for spelling errors. No points off for this, however, as this is an easy fix.).
Please continue to write! (10/10)
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Martiniman
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Dec 15, 2011 |
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Excellent story, although in my opinion an unsatisfying ending! (10/10)
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DesertDom
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Aug 26, 2008 |
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Interesting story line. It did seem to drag a tiny bit eanr the end, but all in all, well written. (8/10)
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littleone_
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Apr 13, 2008 |
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My congratulations to JLou on his immagination and his ability to think up a good story. Right now his writing is a bit stiff. Jlou just need more practice writing, a good critique and some time to develop into a first rate author. When Jlou can give his readers a sense of “This is really happening” he will be one of the best authors around. (5/10)
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nancy
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Aug 4, 2007 |
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This is an enthralling story that kept me reading the four parts that are now available. It is very well written and readable. I am eagerly awaiting the next chapters, which will hopefully describe "The Auction Block" of the title (9/10)
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- Replied by:
vistrouk
(Edit) (Aug 10, 2007)
- This is a good story but a copy of "lesbian slave auction" of Alex Payne published by A1 BDSM BOOKS
- Replied by:
jlou
(Edit) (Aug 27, 2007)
- Vistrouk is correct. I am the author for both stories. A1 BDSM books did a wonderful job editing the book and buying their version is a good investment. I chose however to post it in installments here in order to have interaction with the readers. Please feel free to contact me with any thoughts or observations.
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chksng19
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Jul 29, 2007 |
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(sigh) What a pleasure! A nicely crafted tale, with some little action but promise of much more. Well done!
The pleasure certainly continues with Chapter 3 and 4. Continuing high quality even in the 'plot explaining' sections like these.
07-29; better and better, let's keep it coming! (9/10)
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fantazmaster
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Jul 27, 2007 |
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There were several things in this author's work that impressed me enough to give a 10 rating.First of all is a well thought out premise to the story,combined with a very natural dialogue that flows with the narrative.An intriguing feature within the story is the inorporation of other characters within the story,such as the stubborn redhead,who is made all the more intriguing with the skillful background of how she came to be in this situation.I look foward to further chapters! (10/10)
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heycarrieanne
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Feb 11, 2007 |
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A very nice beginning ... I am eager to read more. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
jlou
(Edit) (Aug 27, 2007)
- Hello Carrie Anne: Sorry about my absence. I have posted the next installment of my story "The Auction Block." I hope you check it out. I will be adding two new chapters every 2 weeks. There will be no more delays. Thanks, I hope to hear from you.
Jlou
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misssub85
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Feb 10, 2007 |
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Can't wait to read part two!! (9/10)
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Mad Lews
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Feb 10, 2007 |
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Really nice start. Good solid concept, please don't make us wait too long for part 2 (9/10)
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headhunteras19
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Feb 8, 2007 |
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Good story concept, but nothing really original yet. (5/10)
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sheilagirl
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Feb 6, 2007 |
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Great start! I'm looking forward to see how this progresses! This is one of my favorite fantasies. I love that it is written so well too. (9/10)
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dennisthmn
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Feb 5, 2007 |
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a very good start. (10/10)
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azrlg17
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Feb 4, 2007 |
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Well so far nothing much has happened. But how the hell will the stepmother explain this to their father? Unless he is in on it and that doesn't seem likely. The story should have begun with the father out of the picture. Then the stepmother should have isolated the two sisters (which is kind of hard since they are of legal age so they should have been younger). The way it is written just seems like a good way to get caught. A real pro would never take such insane risks. (5/10)
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- Replied by:
azrlg17
(Edit) (Jul 3, 2007)
- So the stepmother disappears. Makes a little bit more sense but still a bit risky. The story makes the standard error most brainwashing stories make. The victim resists, resists, resists and then breaks. People don't work like that. They would fake breaking. Maybe let themselves be sold and then try to escape if escape is not possible. And why did Kate not attack Madam Hardings when she visited her?
It seems now that the story is missing either a mc or a scifi label for the machine that irreversibly converts any girl into a lesbian. Or maybe that was only a lie.
No real sex in the first 3 chapters yet, still a 5 but the story is keeping my interest.
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mkemse
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Feb 4, 2007 |
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not bad to start with, hope to see more real good (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
BruceCC
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Feb 4, 2007 |
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Ah, a diamond in the rough! This is one of the best stories I've read in a long time. Spelling, grammar, paragraph spacing... all far above average and so far the story codes are even accurate!! (A rarity these days.) I eagerly await future chapters. (10/10)
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