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The Guys and Me Again
Author: Eric Boss
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(Added on Feb 3, 2007)
(This month 13958 readers) (Total 27336 readers) |
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Three young skinheads, three big-titted young girls, a eighteen year old whore, plenty of fun for the guys and me, agony for them. |
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| Reviewer:
susankarl
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Mar 29, 2007 |
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Hard to describe my reaction to your story.
I love details of women suffering, so a few of your delightfully savage ideas certainly promoted a damp spell, but the savagery is somehow lost in the desire to prove you can write something really dirty and disgusting.
Not my scene, but I feel your ability to write of heartless cruelty is interesting.
Spacing out the lay-out would make reading a little easier. And not crushing too many acts of obscenity into one paragraph would enable the reader to interpret the action in a more leisurely manner.
But don't stop.
It will offend many and disgust some, but people should not read our stories if they are going to be upset by descriptions of brutality and sex.
(5/10)
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