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Paradox
Author: sunniedays
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(Added on Feb 9, 2007)
(This month 10413 readers) (Total 21564 readers) |
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Sometimes the best of intentions go terribly awry. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 30, 2009 |
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This story is a perfect example of what happens when you go too far. When wishful thinking takes over reason.
This is as close to madness as you can get, both in writing as in feeling.
This is horror in its purest form.
JJ (9/10)
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Mothbrad
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Apr 5, 2007 |
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An amazing story that deserves a ten. This story explores a side to obsession and eroticism that is often approached in a more shallow way - the question "what if this goes too far?". I was with the protagonist every inch of the way. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Elkor
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Feb 15, 2007 |
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I really wanted to give this a 9, but I can't honestly say I enjoyed the story. Very well written, and very disturbing.
(10/10)
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DeGrinch
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Feb 13, 2007 |
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Wow! What a horror story. Keep this up and you could be the Steven King of BDSM. I do like a little sex with my reading however. If this is your first effort you have a great fucture. (9/10)
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Mad Lews
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Feb 11, 2007 |
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First, it's not terribly erotic, not erotic at all. If that is what you seek it may not be for you. Instead we have an unusually introspective piece that explores a very limited interaction between two protagonists. In the end the role reversal is, well, paradoxical. Very well done, and thoughtful writing. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Guiller
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Feb 10, 2007 |
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LOved the theme and found nothing wrong with the story :) (8/10)
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