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Modern Slave Labour
Author: gorgeous
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(Added on Mar 15, 2007)
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A story which i plan to extend, it\'s the dawn of a new era in amERIA |
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Average (?):  (5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
sirbor
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Mar 18, 2007 |
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Not bad as an introduction but I hope to see more of this story in the future. It runs rather slowly, it might be better to space out the background information between more of the real story. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
heycarrieanne
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Mar 16, 2007 |
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I like your story, but you have some major writing errors. I would have to think that English isn't your native language because you use a lot of synonyms such as "bear" instead of "bare." If you clean up your mistakes in the next chapter(s), I will be glad to raise your score. (5/10)
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