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The Penthouse Slave
Author: Anonymous
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(Added on Apr 4, 2007)
(This month 30393 readers) (Total 70857 readers) |
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A rich young teen is transformed from a haughty, stuck-up bitch into a submissive slave by her new step-brother and step-sister! |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Oct 6, 2010 |
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I agree with littleone here. Though 'Anonymous' has a way with words, it isn't enough to hide a story which has holes in it the size of Lake Erie.
On top of that, I didn't feel anything but loathing for the characters. Not an ounce of behaviour to get me in a cheery mood, let alone empathize or root for them.
Could have been better.
JJ (7/10)
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nloah
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Mar 21, 2009 |
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Not quite perfect (what is, really?) but an outstanding, erotic read. I found that there was great attention to detail. (9/10)
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littleone_
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Dec 8, 2007 |
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How could this ever get ten stars? Yes, the author is indeed a word smith. But while he can craft a scene that totally paints a picture it is still not a good story. The plot is totally predictable and very slow moving. If he author would learn how to write and combine that with his ability to use words like a Michael Angelo used his paint brush he as some real good stories inside me. (5/10)
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tbear4759
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Apr 23, 2007 |
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you have done well. (9/10)
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kinkcrazy
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Apr 18, 2007 |
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Very well written (10/10)
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jep33
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Apr 16, 2007 |
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Although I have written a few stories I have never done a review. After reading the first twenty pages of this story, I simply felt compelled to express my appreciation and thanks for a job well done. I admire the style and the description of each scene. Again, well done!
JEP
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