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A Date With Destiny Author: demurelyours
(Added on Apr 6, 2007) (This month 10326 readers) (Total 24631 readers)
A story based very closely on fact, about a sub finally realizing her dreams and fantasy's, changing her life forever.

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Number of Ratings: 13
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Weighed Average (?): (7.5/10)
Average Rating: (7.5/10)
Highest Rating: (10/10)
Lowest Rating: (2/10)

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Reviewer: chzwiz007 (Edit) Rating: Nov 20, 2011
Needs better editing. The start was clunky and it could use more background to fill in the obvious questions about the characters and the situation. (5/10)

Reviewer: mkemse (Edit) Rating: Apr 10, 2008
very nicely done just wish it was longer (9/10)

Reviewer: Polecat (Edit) Rating: Feb 2, 2008
Nice story, if a bit short.
I'd like to see more. Very promising. (8/10)

Reviewer: hoodedandmasked (Edit) Rating: Jun 14, 2007
OK (4/10)

Reviewer: ElectricBadger (Edit) Rating: Jun 14, 2007
Great story, just needs some technical re-working and it'll be fantastic. Hope to see more in the future! (7/10)

Reviewer: thomas_g50 (Edit) Rating: Jun 13, 2007
I loved, and I hope this doesn't upset the author, but I laughed all the way through it. I especially love the creative way she expressed moans and groans and speaking with a gag on. Histerically creative.
I hope, demurelyyours, that continue (10/10)

Reviewer: RiverOtter (Edit) Rating: Jun 3, 2007
Good action, good descriptions; lots of tension. My only suggestion is technical--using indents for the character's quotes would make it much easier to follow. It didn't detract too much though. (7/10)

Reviewer: tbear4759 (Edit) Rating: Apr 23, 2007
I knew just from the story description there would be spelling errors............A story based very closely on fact, about a sub finally realizing her dreams and fantasy's and I wasn't dissapointed. the author should use spell check and an editor. (2/10)
Replied by: demurelyours (Edit) (Apr 26, 2007)
Well Bear,
I was told to thank you for your review. I am however going to ask why, with all of your spare time , do you leave those of us trying to write a good story such negative reviews. Have you written any stories? Have you peeked out of your shell and bared your soul? Hmmmm, let me check....nope! I do LOVE the reviews, and I have gotten very positive feedback and advice to improve upon my story. Thank you to ALL of you who have left me with a good taste in my mouth. I will choose to ignore the ignorant. Thank you again Bear for reminding me of all the miserable people that do exist.

Reviewer: suzy9 (Edit) Rating: Apr 16, 2007
i can't wait for you to continue; i've enjoyed it so far very much. (8/10)

Reviewer: La Toya (Edit) Rating: Apr 14, 2007
A very well done story. I have to also agree, that I know of no sub/slave that would give themselfs to someone, sight unseen (8/10)

Reviewer: mehitabela (Edit) Rating: Apr 10, 2007
well written and suspensful, i can't wait for the next chapter! i agree with snark though, i couldn't give my life to one i'd never sen. (8/10)

Reviewer: Snark (Edit) Rating: Apr 8, 2007
Very well done! Nice detail, though why someone would submit so far without a visual clue strains the ability to suspend disbelief. Nevertheless the progression is interesting and the descriptions aren't cliched. A little careful editing would improve the few disconnects that the story contains. (8/10)

Reviewer: dennisthmn (Edit) Rating: Apr 8, 2007
very good story. hurry with next chapter. (10/10)

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