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The Ragging orgy
Author: bdsmauthorindia
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(Added on May 11, 2007)
(This month 9889 readers) (Total 19928 readers) |
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The bitch was snooty and a snob, but she was soon to learn new lessons in life. |
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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May 14, 2007 |
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A little too stilted, which is more a product of the author being from India than of her (him?) being a bad writer. And there was nothing wrong with the fonts in the story I read. (In fact, it was the easiest to read of the several I've tried tonight.) I think there really needed to be more of it finished before it was posted. There's an awful lot of foreshadowing for such a short piece. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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May 13, 2007 |
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you badly need to change the fancy fonts to make it more read able (4/10)
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