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Master's Return
Author: Cum Girl
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(Added on May 20, 2007)
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Cum Girl is caught masterbating by Master & is punished for her inappropriate behaviour |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Oct 7, 2010 |
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Contrary to what mkemske thinks, there's not too many similar stories out there, bar those written by Cum Girl herself, that is.
Sure, there's similarly themed stories -this is after all a BDSM stories website- but none of those have this intrinsic quality. At least, not among the few thousand I've read so far.
Cum Girl expertly writes down feelings and moods, in such a way that one senses those feelings and moods instead of 'just' reading about them.
One senses Cum Girl's beauty also. A beauty which has nothing to do with physical appearance, but with the person that goes behind the descriptions, be it the author or Cum Girl or a symbiosys of the two.
Because of that beauty, both in the person and in the writing, I find it terribly sad that Cum Girl stopped posting stories as of December 2007... because these short stories are true marvels of erotiscism.
JJ (10/10)
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earthed_angel
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Jul 23, 2007 |
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My favorite part of this story is the way cum girl describes the way Master has taught her to love her body. Wasn't my cup of tea in the way of horny-makin', but still a very nice story. I would like to see (since this is the first posting by cum girl) some of the earlier sessions, or perhaps the first meeting or scene with Master, to see how the training was developed. I also really liked in this story that we had an earlier scene where cum girl messes up and Master was gentle and forgiving (even amused?) - it was a nice contrast to see that what she did later was a serious offense.
Some minor spelling errors, but otherwise well-written. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
cum girl
(Edit) (Jul 24, 2007)
- Thank you earthed_angel. This is my least favourite 'story' as it is the least real. Master gave me 45 minutes to write him a tale and I came up with this in bare bones form. Whilst all the component parts are accurate it is fiction. Since then I have only written about things that have actually happened and feel more comfortable with my writing. If I read my other 'stories' I get to remember, to be amazed and to feel closer to Master. I don't get that with this 'story'.
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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May 31, 2007 |
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ok story but there are too many simlar out thier (5/10)
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- Replied by:
cum girl
(Edit) (Jun 27, 2007)
- Thank you for your review mkemse. I am sorry you did not enjoy the story. I will try to do better in the future. Cum Girl
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