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Career Choice
Author: JensenDenmark
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(Added on May 20, 2007)
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This is the story about Rick and his journey towards overcoming the deaths of his parents and finding his place in life. |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
jls152
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Oct 27, 2010 |
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I became too tiring to try and figure out what you were trying to say using the wrong words. The story seemed to have potential. Continue writing but use a proof reader to help you convey your story and to help us enjoy it. (3/10)
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| Reviewer:
78curious
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May 21, 2007 |
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Has good potential. Would like to see how it develops... (8/10)
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slaveneedledick
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May 21, 2007 |
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The premise of the story was ok but the grammer mistakes made the story a bit difficult to read and comprehend. (6/10)
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trainmanretep
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May 20, 2007 |
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good enough to want to see more. This could be very interesting. (8/10)
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