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Filmstars (german)
Author: AnnaMK
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(Added on May 22, 2007)
(This month 16331 readers) (Total 33761 readers) |
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how to become porn stars - wie man zum Pornostar wird |
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| Reviewer:
Venom
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May 30, 2007 |
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Mach' Dir nichts aus Woolyhat's unlogischem Kommentar. Ich freue mich immer, deutschsprachige Geschichten hier zu finden.
Gut gefallen hat mir die Interview-Szene. Durch die richtigen Fragen wird hier mit geringem Aufwand eine erniedrigende Situation geschaffen. Aber warum hast Du so viele gute Ansätze (Farm, Eber) nur hastig im letzten Teil angerissen? (6/10)
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- Replied by:
annamk1977
(Edit) (May 30, 2007)
- hm, ich glaube ich muss da zugeben, dass ich am ende alles ein wenig über ds Knie gebrochen habe. Ich ahbe leider sehr wenig Zeit und wollte diese Geschichte zumindest einmal fertigstellen, bevor ich sie poste.
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| Reviewer:
sylvia_ber
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May 23, 2007 |
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Die Geschcihte ist vielversprechend, für meinen Geschmack aber etwas zu zerfasert. Die Geschichte liest sich mehr wie ein Expose. Ich weiß, das war genau so von der Authorin gedacht, stört mich aber nichtdestotrotz beim lesen. Trotzdem ist die Geschichte vielversprechend. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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May 23, 2007 |
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Sorry, Anna. I couldn't read your story either, but I wanted to help counteract woolyhat's score.
I did like your title/synopsis, and I tried to write a story partly in Deutsch on the topic of a woman making her film debut. It's posted here on the site if you're interested. I've edited it a little since then, taking account of comments made by critics and correspondents, but don't dare post the edited version for fear of what the site's HTML translation software might do to it.
Perhaps what this site needs is a seperate section for non-English stories, where people like woolyhat wouldn't be allowed to ruin your scores. Many of the people who post stories here obviously aren't comfortable in English, and they get low scores as a result. If they had a place to post in their native languages, maybe everyone would be happier.
I hope you manage to garner a real review soon. Hals und beinbruch. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
annamk1977
(Edit) (May 23, 2007)
- thank you, maybe this would be a good hint to the administration, but I marked all my stories with "german" in brackets, so everybody should notice the language at once :)
I would like to translate th story for english readers, but my english skills are not very good.
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woolyhat
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May 23, 2007 |
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I cannot understand why these German stories are printed in German, I do not speak or read German so why are they printed here for the site to read. (3/10)
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- Replied by:
annamk1977
(Edit) (May 23, 2007)
- maybe it helps if I give you a hint: german is the language german people can read, so the idea might be, that german people can read stories printed in german. was this as helpful as your review?
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