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Honeymoon Gone Awry Part II
Author: Kirk
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(Added on Jun 5, 2007)
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In "Honeymoon Gone Awry" our newlyweds Doug and Julie were freed by the sinister eccentric Edgar and his companion Monica, but are they truly free? In the sequel "Honeymoon Gone Awry Part II" learn what happens to the young naive couple after they are released. If you haven't read "Honeymoon Gone Awry," I suggest you read that first before beginning the sequel. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Jorgy444
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Jul 9, 2012 |
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Another great story from your
perverted imagination! Thanks
for entertaining us with your
very erotic and twisted stories.
I am anticipating your next tale
of dementia. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Voracious Reader
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May 1, 2008 |
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Still looking for the promised next chapters.... But good job so far. (8/10)
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sadolphino
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Dec 10, 2007 |
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Great story so far!!!
Only that Julie needed to speek in a lisple voice after her full tooth extractions, as the doctor f...ed her after his work.
I agree with bomiha. Julie's head hair needs to be permanently removed as well, maybe even her brows. And it should look like Julie is enjoying this like it was the case during her tooth removal. I'd like the tattoos as well, AND piercings of course. (10/10)
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sissylorinc
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Jul 17, 2007 |
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outstanding, keeps readers on edge (10/10)
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bomiha
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Jul 11, 2007 |
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Adding new suggestion - you could also have Julie's hair on her head permanently removed, having her go through life bald as well as without teeth
Great story. Take it to the extreme by having Julie turned into the ultimate slut, to Doug's despair. Have her perform a gangbang with 10-20 black men in front of Doug, perhaps public in a Adult movie, getting assfucked, licking ass and drinking piss. Have her perform an animal gangbang at a farm, sucking of, deepthroating and swallowing a donkey, getting assfucked by statllions and fucked by bulls, crawling in the pigs mud. And finally, have her go away for a weekend with a biker gang, returning with lots of obscene tattoos on ass, tits, cunt, back, belly, thigs, all taped for Doug to view Julie begging for it all, used as a prostitute, fucked in public and so on. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Kirk
(Edit) (Jul 7, 2007)
- Wow, that's a lot. Thanks for the suggestions. I'll certainly consider them.
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| Reviewer:
heycarrieanne
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Jul 6, 2007 |
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Poor Doug and Julie!!! The honeymoon is over, I think. LOL I was hoping you would continue their story and you did a great job! I am eager to read more of their humiliation. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Kirk
(Edit) (Jul 7, 2007)
- Thanks, Carrieanne, for the words of encouragement. I'm sitting on several chapters right now and will soon be doing another read and revision before posting. Hang in there! lol
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Jul 6, 2007 |
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Equal in quality to the first section of the story: can't wait for the next installment. Things do move rather slowly, through the dentist section especially. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Kirk
(Edit) (Jul 7, 2007)
- Thanks for the feedback. I tend to rush through some sections, but I did spend some time at the dentist. Hey, it's not every day a 22 year old loses her teeth and has them replaced with dentures. lol
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| Reviewer:
cala
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Jun 7, 2007 |
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Quite promising. Would like to read more. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Kirk
(Edit) (Jul 7, 2007)
- More is on the way. :)
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littleone_
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Jun 6, 2007 |
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It is hard to put my finger on it but while he story started out out but the fourth chaper it no no longer had my interest. The author has a flair for words, good creativity and shows a lot of promise for a new author. He does need work on keep his plot moving. (5/10)
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- Replied by:
Kirk
(Edit) (Jun 7, 2007)
- It looks like you're rating the wrong story. There is no Chapter 4 YET, and frankly, I have no idea what you're saying.
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