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Everything's Good
Author: TOXIS
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(Added on Jun 9, 2007)
(This month 15859 readers) (Total 32248 readers) |
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Ever hear a story about someone who had it so good and then didn't any more. Here are a series of stories that take that theme with a nasty twist. Suggestions are always welcome. Not all of the codes apply to every story. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
csr
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Aug 3, 2007 |
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I enjoyed this story, brief as it was. Good style and decent little twist at the end. You should write more! (8/10)
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Night Writer
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Jul 9, 2007 |
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Excellent story-noir - I love the dark stuff. Although I thought, just maybe, I saw the twist coming, it was still satisfying. Brief, but image evoking, with a style that matched the content perfectly. More please... (9/10)
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- Replied by:
TOXIS
(Edit) (Jul 27, 2007)
- More to come. And perhaps Blair will get out of that hot trailer and into a something much worse. And Sarah, must not forget her.
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| Reviewer:
bracemaiden
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Jul 4, 2007 |
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Rating this one is such a tough call - the twist at the end changed my feelings to the story into a mish-mash of conflicted thoughts. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
TOXIS
(Edit) (Jul 27, 2007)
- Thanks for the kind thoughts. The premise of this anthology is a dark one, and your reservations are perfectly valid. Hope you enjoy the rest.
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| Reviewer:
Snark
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Jun 11, 2007 |
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Cute! Nice story, fairly well edited. This short story could easily have been extended, but still works despite its' brevity. The twist was well concealed and held to the very end, as it should. (8/10)
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TOXIS
(Edit) (Jul 27, 2007)
- Some long, some short - but ultimately each story decides its own length. Sorry but no more for this one. Thank you for the kind words.
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Mad Lews
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Jun 9, 2007 |
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I always love a good short story, especially one that ends with a grin. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
TOXIS
(Edit) (Jul 27, 2007)
- Thanks. Glad you liked it.
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ferricsmith
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Jun 9, 2007 |
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Great story! A little short, but no filler. Can't wait to read more like it. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
TOXIS
(Edit) (Jul 27, 2007)
- Hope to have more for you soon. Thanks for the kind words.
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