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Given Away Author: sarah~
(Added on Jun 21, 2007) (This month 11326 readers) (Total 22754 readers)
A Master delivers his slave for play with a stranger.

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Weighed Average (?): (7/10)
Average Rating: (7.5/10)
Highest Rating: (8/10)
Lowest Rating: (5/10)

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Reviewer: Deputy Duffy (Edit) Rating: Jun 26, 2007
It was almost there. Seemed like a rough draft. But if that was your first story then not bad. I did much worse with my first effort. (7/10)

Reviewer: melroseplace (Edit) Rating: Jun 25, 2007
I very much enjoyed the situation, the total submission. I am envious of the slave's plight. (8/10)

Reviewer: mkemse (Edit) Rating: Jun 25, 2007
good read, recommendable to others (7/10)

Reviewer: chksng19 (Edit) Rating: Jun 25, 2007
A pleasant start, with some brownie points for some decent exposition of the thoughts of the "victim". A careful job of editing, as the other reviewers suggest, will make this story a gem to behold. Anxious for more!
(8/10)

Reviewer: somewriter (Edit) Rating: Jun 22, 2007
As the other reviewer points out, the story needs tidying up, but I still rate it quite highly as a simple scene. (8/10)

Reviewer: heycarrieanne (Edit) Rating: Jun 21, 2007
I think you have a really good idea for your story. Personally, stories about subs being shared make me really hot! But you have some major writing errors--you are writing in the past but you are using present tense, some of the time. You also have some typos. I think cleaned up this story would rate an 8 or 9! (5/10)

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