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Sentiments of a Submissive
Author: JEP
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(Added on Jul 14, 2007)
(This month 22695 readers) (Total 40027 readers) |
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The true sentiments of a submissive who asked if she could detail her preferences and experiences. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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Rating:  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
funtime37
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Jul 19, 2007 |
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personally i feel that it is about how the story is written. i like it not only is is well written from the first person effectively, it is a good story as far as the content goes. i feel that if a person does not like the subject of the story then don't read it. but don't right a bad review just because it does not get you going. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
jep33
(Edit) (Jul 20, 2007)
- Many thanks for the positive support!
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| Reviewer:
cum girl
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Jul 17, 2007 |
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Yawn. This is NOT what being a submissive is about. It isn't about pierced and chained nipples (mine are at the instruction of my Master), it isn't about whether your pussy and arse is shaved or not (mine is at the instruction of my Master), it isn't about whether you cleanse yourself or not. It IS about the relationship between Master and submissive. This may have the sum of some of the parts but has no substance. (4/10)
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- Replied by:
jep33
(Edit) (Jul 18, 2007)
- I would like to offer my appreciation to the reviewer for both taking the time to read the submission and for writing such a passionate review.
I would submit, in fact, that everyone has a strong expertise as to their own life experiences and, perhaps, the experiences of those around them. I would be loathe, however, to agree to the notion that a particular set of life experiences could be extended to apply to similar experiences of all others around the world.
In any case, I wish the reviewer and all readers nothing but the best in finding stories that meet their particular needs and desires.
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H Dean
(Edit) (Jul 18, 2007)
- I think this review missed the mark for what a review is supposed to be. It's not about whether you shave your pussy or ass, it is about the telling of a story. This one was written quite well. This wasn't a "how to" book on what a submissive is supposed to be. It is a story on the life of one particular girl. Nothing more and nothing less. I really hate this sort of review.
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cum girl
(Edit) (Jul 19, 2007)
- Firstly let me apologise for any offence I have caused. I will clarify my rating. As a submissive I was deeply interested in hearing the real voice of another. Mostly we only appear on this site as objects and the more abused we are the better.
The use of the word "sentiments" in the title implied that the reader would learn how Miss Peach felt as a submissive. Instead the 'story' focused on a hotchpotch of sexual acts (breast play, watersports, shaving). At no point did I have any sense of how Miss Peach felt about these beyond enjoying them or how she felt generally as a submissive. I found no sense of emotion or any eroticism in the story.
The quality of the writing was fine, if a bit pedestrian, but I finished knowing nothing more about Miss Peach than when I started.
For anyone who wishes to know how it feels to be submissive may I recommend Rachael Ross' excellent "Of Sand and Pipers".
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H Dean
(Edit) (Jul 20, 2007)
- Cum Girl, I will first point out that "sentiments" can simply be thoughts and do not require explanations of emotions. There are multiple definitions to the word. So, your interperetation of what sentiments are is only a partial definition.
I will also offer that, had you stated what you just did in the review, you would not have been so strongly critisized. Your review was and is unfair - your amendments are more along the lines of what a review should be. To quote from the "How To" page for review writing:
**A gentle reminder: Please refrain from judging the work based solely on its content. All stories on this site are accompanied with story codes and synopsis. They are there to give readers some advanced information on the type of content they contain. If you have an emotional issue with any particular type of content or gender code, do the author and us a service by not reviewing his or her work unless you can provide a dispassionate review that concentrates on style, writing skill, novelty, etc rather than your personal distaste for its content.
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Jul 17, 2007 |
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I'm not a big fan of the 'true reminicense' stories, but this was good. Not told as a story, just a bunch of loosely connected points on a graph. I'd like to read some more points. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
jep33
(Edit) (Jul 18, 2007)
- Since your not a fan of these types of stories, I appreciate the positive comment. Subsequent additions to the story will, hopefully, include more points that will be to many people's likings.
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| Reviewer:
Crowheart
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Jul 16, 2007 |
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I can only agree to the previous reviewers: a well written story.
I have to admit it touches my submissive side...
Anyway, I'd really like to read more. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
jep33
(Edit) (Jul 18, 2007)
- Your comments are certainly welcome and they have been shared with Miss Peach. She tells me that she is busy writing additional material for the submission.
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| Reviewer:
for_reel_boy
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Jul 16, 2007 |
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A beautifully written and highly charged piece.............amazing. Thank you. Please right more. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
jep33
(Edit) (Jul 18, 2007)
- Well, thank you for your kind comments. More is on the way.
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| Reviewer:
Mad Lews
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Jul 15, 2007 |
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Nice descriptive essay. Another approach that's hot but more telling than showing. Still the descriptions have a ring of authenticity,please do continue. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
jep33
(Edit) (Jul 16, 2007)
- Thanks for your comments. Hopefully, it will be continued and will include some "showing" in addition to "telling.
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| Reviewer:
H Dean
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Jul 14, 2007 |
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Not my brand of story, but well done just the same. Interesting, if a bit off for my tastes. The style of writing was very effective and seems familiar. I suspect that this author has another moniker. At any rate, I've nothing but positive remarks to leave here and I think it would be fun to see the other places this story might head. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
jep33
(Edit) (Jul 16, 2007)
- In view of the fact that this is not your brand of story, your review is particularly meaningful. Thank you for your comments.
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jul 14, 2007 |
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interesting way to write a story, very enjoyable to read (7/10)
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- Replied by:
jep33
(Edit) (Jul 16, 2007)
- As always, your review is meaningful. Thank you.
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