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Catherines Home Invasion
Author: Gizmo
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(Added on Jul 31, 2007)
(This month 15972 readers) (Total 33846 readers) |
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Catherine has been waiting for this weekend to satisfy her BDSM fetish for a long time. She stops by the grocery store to buy some bondage items when she runs into her old schoolmate Benny, who is aware of Catherines little secret and decides to follow her home. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
bracemaiden
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Aug 25, 2007 |
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Yeah, pretty much agree with xDantex111. (8/10)
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Rhabbi
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Aug 3, 2007 |
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Gizmo,
As a first effort this is good. The major problem is it is a bit choppy and the scene is a bit hard to follow. How did she get from th chair to standing in the living room ready to be humiliated? (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
rdrexel
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Aug 1, 2007 |
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One of the best I have read. It woould be good to have a little more tension. She seems ashamed of her kinky nature, which could be used to make this more than a one night scenrio. Before this turns into a romance, I would like see her really struggle with her secret being exposed - vacillating between desire, self-loathing, and displaced anger. The Dom (Benny) needs to begin a road self-actualization as well.
Really good and imaginative beginning. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
xDantex111
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Jul 31, 2007 |
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great beginning for a story and nice and descriptive. I just felt the slightest bit rushed into the action of the story, ie: there wasn't much interaction between the Dom and the sub before the forced sexual humiliation began. Keep up teh good work! (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jul 31, 2007 |
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can't wait for more excellent so far nice start (9/10)
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