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Star Wars: A Legacy of Force
Author: DarthSaad
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(Added on Jul 31, 2007)
(This month 34657 readers) (Total 59346 readers) |
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Set in the Star Wars universe around the current Legacy of the Force series of books - Jedi Knight Jacen Solo turns to the dark side and becomes as dangerous as his grandfather Darth Vader, and as sasistically cruel. Not even those closest to him will be spared as he falls further and further into darkness. I have striven to give enought background so that those who are not fans of Star Wars can still [hopefully] enjoy the tale of ruthless cruelty and the torture of defiant heroines. |
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| Reviewer:
Snark
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Aug 7, 2007 |
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Interesting continuation of the saga with a nasty twist. It desperately needs proof reading. There are enough small errors to detract from the enjoyment of the story. The writing is decent, a few confusing passages, but most everything would be caught by a cold proof read. I look forward to more. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
darthsaad
(Edit) (Aug 9, 2007)
- Thanks for the review and yes, too many typos. I have reposted the chapter with all fixed [hopefully] and will work harder to omit them from upcoming posts
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chksng19
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Aug 2, 2007 |
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A little bit edgy for a non-SW fan, I think. Lots of jargon which would be less than understandable.
A pretty tame start for a BDSM story here; hope you can pick up the action soon. (7/10)
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Alekmhs
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Aug 1, 2007 |
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i really like it awesome i have been hoping for someone to write something like this can you email me when u update this (9/10)
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Mothbrad
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Aug 1, 2007 |
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At last the Star Wars story! Anyway, this is a very sexy beginning, and I'm sure that DarthSaad will keep this going until it reaches its peak. One to watch. (And I'm not a Star Wars expert - outside of the movies - and found it quite understandable). (9/10)
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- Replied by:
darthsaad
(Edit) (Aug 9, 2007)
- Thanks man. Glad you are liking it.
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bmtphoenix
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Aug 1, 2007 |
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Excellent start. Great idea torturing Mara Jade. The only downside, and I guess this might be something on my side, is that there are question marks all over the place.
Also, there is no way much of this story would make a lot of sense if you weren't a Star Wars fan. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
darthsaad
(Edit) (Aug 9, 2007)
- Your right, BMT, and I knew going in that this would be a story that appeals to a select group. Fortunately there are a LOT of SW fans and a significant number [that I have met anyway] love the idea of the ladies of a galaxy far far away in perilous situations - as witnessed by the number of pics you can find of Leia in that gold bikini. I am trying to fill in some blanks for those who aren't as familiar with the extended universe, but I didnt want to get bogged down in too much exposition. Hopefully I'll find a nice balance.
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bmtphoenix
(Edit) (Sep 24, 2007)
- Just read part 4, still excellent. Keep it up!
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