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Mammary Distress
Author: Von Schmiser
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(Added on Aug 3, 2007)
(This month 60469 readers) (Total 108100 readers) |
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This tale deals with the refined and detailed torture of women, centered almost exclusively on their breasts. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
pharma
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Apr 29, 2016 |
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OMG this is so hot story. Thanks a lot. It is very good writted, and the text is easy to read.
The torture is quite intense, and I liked the masochistic nature of girls. Also the torture does not causes permanent damage, that is very important.
Probably an author can make the story more full, I agree with other commentators. But I enjoyed the reading very much! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 20, 2012 |
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Story often reads like a movie missing a couple of frames every odd minute, which makes the movie hop along in little staccato bursts.
I liked the story though, just that, thanks to these "missing frames" there's an air of thinness surrounding the story because it's lacking in body.
JJ (7/10)
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jethro jodhpur
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Aug 27, 2007 |
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According to his step son, Rabbit 1 died on Saturday. Why no one has noticed this is beyond me. (8/10)
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mkemse
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Aug 19, 2007 |
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what i loved about this story most is that this subjecty is rarely written about (9/10)
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stevie335
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Aug 5, 2007 |
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Great story, i am looking forward to read the next chapters. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Snark
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Aug 4, 2007 |
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Ahh yes, the mythical masochistic beauty who begs for ever more. An 8 so far for the same reasons as previously mentioned. Proof read and watch the continuity. A glimpse inside the mind of the characters to understand their thoughts and reactions as well as the descriptions can easily raise the rating. Looking forward to many more chapters. (8/10)
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condor6
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Aug 4, 2007 |
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Excellent. Looking for extreme masochist women for ages, especially women with massive tits and verrry long nipples. What does she hope for next?
Huge cunt and ass torture? (8/10)
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chksng19
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Aug 4, 2007 |
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Von, this is the best you have written to this point. Not just a "stiffener", it explores the mind of a masochist... not something often done in this forum.
Ignoring some poorly worded sentences, this is very good. Can't wait for more! (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
DeGrinch
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Aug 4, 2007 |
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"My God this is unbelievable. I never imagined such penetrating searing pain was possible, her tits are on fire. Go on!"
In the line above you've mixed your pronouns, and I think I saw another case earlier. Other than this the gramer etc. were great.
I do sugest that you fill out the personality of the 'torturer' more it adds 'feel' to story. (8/10)
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