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Temple of Torture - Vanessa's First Journey
Author: Venom
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(Added on Sep 13, 2007)
(This month 42945 readers) (Total 86500 readers) |
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Three slavegirls ("a ponygirl, a painslut and a snuffette") become attractions at the "Heaven's Gate Exhibition", an extreme and exclusive underground torture fair. Their deliciously cruel Mistress guides them to unknown heights of suffering. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
SamCurious
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Feb 1, 2012 |
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absolutely chilling! (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Kira
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Feb 25, 2010 |
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Its like a treasure nowadays to find like this story. Keep coming every time You like, thanks for your writing. Like Your writing style. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Venom
(Edit) (Feb 28, 2010)
- Thank you!
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 30, 2009 |
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Raving torture extravaganza with a surprisingly good storyline and well developed characters. Caligula and Nero should have lived to read this tale, they both would have given this tale the thumbs-up. I know I do.
JJ (10/10)
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- Replied by:
JimmyJump
(Edit) (Jan 30, 2009)
- I forgot to add Torquemada, but he prolly would have poked you with a branding iron...
JJ
- Replied by:
Venom
(Edit) (Feb 1, 2009)
- I know another one: our beloved Donatien Alphonse François de Sade. He could also find one or two elements from his work in this story.
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| Reviewer:
dnotned
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Sep 16, 2007 |
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Character development is sufficient. Description of procedures are clear. Scenes are visual and crisp. Endurance of the slaves is over the top. Sympathy, empathy, or power/control is unavoidable. What more can you want in fantasy! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
JimmyJump
(Edit) (Jan 30, 2009)
- So YOU were that funny looking fella in the grey overalls with the clipboard, frantically ticking checkboxes...
JJ
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Sep 14, 2007 |
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Whew, rough, harsh, and violent. It seems beyond the ability of normal human beings to survive; no matter the stimulant, I doubt either Kate or Vanessa would have.
But it sure is a damn good story! (9/10)
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