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Piss and Cum Slut
Author: Baz
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(Added on Oct 17, 2007)
(This month 28230 readers) (Total 45389 readers) |
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A 32 year old married proffesional lady has a different life at the weekend when she sinks into a seedy underworld to become a piss and cum gang bang slut. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Oct 7, 2010 |
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Lecherous, vivid account of a woman's passtime in the form of degrading acts of all kinds.
While the content of the story speaks directly to some aspects of the mind, the writing leaves a bit to be desired: switching point of view, forgetting words, punctuation marks and bits and parts of sentences, everything comes across as if written in a feverish flux, forgoing the stuffing of the tale.
Not 'bad' per sé, but much room for ammelioration here.
JJ (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Shakespeare_I._Aint
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Oct 19, 2007 |
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This story hits a home run. Slutty wife goes wild while husband watches. Great job!!! (9/10)
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