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The Rocky Road to Ruin
Author: Rubberwolf
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(Added on Oct 21, 2007)
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A works outing to a show leads to perversion and slavery. |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Oct 7, 2010 |
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Very nice story. Not completely to my liking, as I never was a big fan of the "Rocky Horror" stuff. Saw it in the late seventies at London's Picadilly Circus, by the way.
Must agree to an extent with TheVariableX. Although separate chapters isn't a must, leaving a bit of space between parts is... which you of course did in later stories.
Another 'complaint' I have is that the narrative was sometimes evoking a "Get On With It!!" reaction from yours truly. Okay, so maybe it's the late hour, but I was yawning at times...
To compensate the sandman-effect, there were (more than) a few (positively) hair-raising moments too, so that evens-out a tad.
Alison's character and pliability make me still raise the 'score' from recommendable to high quality.
JJ (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Rubberwolf
(Edit) (Oct 14, 2010)
- Thanks for the review Jimmy. Yeah, this was a tough one to write and I was still experimenting with longer stories and how much to charactorise. But overall happy with the result.
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| Reviewer:
sedmwif
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Dec 5, 2007 |
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An interesting story, although somewhere towards the end it lost its "character”. The seduction and dreams were nicely done, as most writers seems to get lost in the process, but Rubber wolf did a very nice job.
I would have liked to see a better ending, but then it seems we all want something!
(9/10)
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| Reviewer:
bmtphoenix
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Oct 29, 2007 |
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Excellent again. I think this one could warrant a second part...I hope so, anyway. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Rubberwolf
(Edit) (Nov 5, 2007)
- Will think about it. :)
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| Reviewer:
TheVariableX
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Oct 22, 2007 |
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I liked it. In future I think you could try submitting the tale in individual chapters, makes for a slightly easier read with the milestones it provides.
Personal opinion but in a few places things could have been pushed further. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Rubberwolf
(Edit) (Oct 22, 2007)
- A good point about cutting into chapters. This is quite a long story and will bear this in mind next time I have something big to post. As for pushing further, you are probably right. However, I wanted the build up to reflect the fact that the heroine was not aware of what was happening, due to the 'Special Medicine'. Anyway, thanks for the feedback and score. Will see what I can do for future offerings.
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