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A Star is Torn
Author: Captive1
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(Added on Nov 27, 2007)
(This month 51440 readers) (Total 94080 readers) |
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Candice, an aspiring actress, learns the hard way that Guatemala is not the place to break into the movie business, get kidnapped, or go to prison. |
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| Reviewer:
CrazedDog
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Mar 23, 2008 |
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Looking for more beyond 3 (8/10)
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mkemse
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Jan 3, 2008 |
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good basivc story, not suprised where it's location is, everyting happens in countries like that, be they fantasy or reality (8/10)
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chksng19
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Dec 21, 2007 |
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Kind of slow in the beginning, but it fills out the plot. Continues getting better... hope there is LOTS more! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Captive1
(Edit) (Dec 23, 2007)
- Lots more! Just have to write it. :D
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| Reviewer:
bmtphoenix
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Dec 7, 2007 |
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Excellent story, well written, I look forward to more! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Captive1
(Edit) (Dec 16, 2007)
- Glad you've enjoyed it. With Chapter 3, things begin taking a much grimmer turn.
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bmtphoenix
(Edit) (Dec 20, 2007)
- Yes they have! This story is great!
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| Reviewer:
MissPiss
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Dec 3, 2007 |
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Not a bad story, it's very well written and interesting. (8/10)
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Venom
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Nov 30, 2007 |
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It begins slowly with some backgrounds, but then, with the airport scene's early part, the story builds up the suspense and starts to get hotter and hotter - and ends in a nice twist! (7/10)
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- Replied by:
Captive1
(Edit) (Nov 30, 2007)
- This is a much longer tale ... Chapters 2 and 3 are in final edit.
- Replied by:
Venom
(Edit) (Dec 7, 2007)
- That are good news...!
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Venom
(Edit) (Dec 7, 2007)
- That are good news...!
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| Reviewer:
hiwiz4u3
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Nov 29, 2007 |
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interesting story...well written... (8/10)
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susankarl
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Nov 28, 2007 |
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More, please. Don't those South American gaols have a nice pair of sadistic wardresses who like to give their Commandante a show of how easily they can get a pretty Gringo girl to admit she is a trouble-maker needing extreme punishment? Susan. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
Captive1
(Edit) (Nov 30, 2007)
- As you will soon see, this goes much further than that. Candice needs to recover before I can subject her to Chapter 3. :)
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