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The Humiliating Ordeal of Allene Blake
Author: ynhumiliator
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(Added on Nov 30, 2001)
(This month 45634 readers) (Total 95560 readers) |
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Allene Blake finds herself at the mercy of her husband's business partner. She's humiliated and abused in several very painful ways. After enduring the day's torments she gets home safely but two weeks later there's a nasty surprise in store for her.... |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jul 13, 2008 |
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very good, love these types of stories (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
BigCat
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Jul 27, 2005 |
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A tribute from one writer to another. Well done. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
KITTIG
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Oct 31, 2004 |
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Hi, thoroughly enjoyed the story very easy to visualise! keep going! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Greenman
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Dec 16, 2001 |
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Actually, I think this is one of the better written stories of it's Genre. Descriptions are good, imagery is clear, (spelling is corrrrect! imagine that ...) and well ... it's just a great fantasy ... I don't have any hang up about Allene's personality, as I've never encountered her before ... besides, I wasn't looking for deep character development, or multifaceted psychology. Two thumbs up ... probably 8.5 (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
hyphen666
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Dec 1, 2001 |
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Nothing special about this story except for the use of Allene as the victim. In most of Allene's stories she's an unabashed masochist when you cut to the chase, here she isn't. Your Allene certainly is not brave nor proud of her ability to absorb punishment. This defeats the purpose of your story. On the plus side you do seem able to write fairly clean, descriptive prose. I'd like to see more of your work in the future. (6/10)
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