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Tammy and the Elders
Author: Anne
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(Added on Dec 22, 2007)
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A young woman is punished for wanton behaviour by being used and abused. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 16, 2009 |
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I enjoyed this intriguing tale very much. Well written with just the right amount of humiliation. A pity it ends where it ends. More isn't always better, but there's still a lot of possibilities here.
JJ (9/10)
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Lewis_Chappelle
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Mar 3, 2008 |
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Unusual subject matter; long enough to be entertaining and short enough to get the point across. Nice work. (8/10)
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sirifalot
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Jan 2, 2008 |
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Kind of bland. (6/10)
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mkemse
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Jan 1, 2008 |
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the story was good, but very rushed, as if it was posted as is to get it posted, (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Dec 29, 2007 |
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A little too quick for the amount of potential the story setup would allow. Perhaps some further chapters, which stray deeper into the secrets of the church? (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
BrownGrizzly
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Dec 27, 2007 |
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Hi
There are some interesting themes in this story; the dark streak underlyng the most respectable people in our society, the desire of an individual to maintain her image in society's eyes by accepting the degradation to her physical self, the discovery of how sexuality touches the taboos in our own minds.
It is a good idea and a very imaginative set up. I think the author should have focused on the darker psychological themes as they could have driven the story into something special. The characters were set up nicely but their particular desires could have been linked to their personalities more, thus giving more meat to the story...
Overall it was a good read and I will read the authors other stories. 6.5 out of 10. Well done and keep writing!
;)
BG (6/10)
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