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Painted into a corner
Author: nakedsub
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(Added on Jan 3, 2008)
(This month 38658 readers) (Total 75675 readers) |
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A successful artist is blackmailed by a 15 year old girl into total and complete slavery. He is subsequently stripped of his clothes, his pride, his property, his humanity and his very soul. He is subjected o dehumanizing humilitation and the torture of his mind and body. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Flow
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Apr 11, 2010 |
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miss the end.... (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
maid babu
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Feb 8, 2009 |
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Fantastic story. Too bad it is so short and after a year i didn't see any follow up. To stop now would be disappointing and frustating. So please, please dear nakedsub don't let your fans in the dark and continue/finish this wonderful story... (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
mastah007
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May 20, 2008 |
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Well written and very promising. I would like to see where this goes - it sounds like she could get pretty serious and put him through some horrible humiliations and punishments in future chapters. Very good start. If it continues like it started I may edit the review to a 10, only reason it's a 9 is because of the short length, it's only just getting started.
To everyone who gave it a bad review because of the type of content: DON'T READ IT IF YOU DON'T WANT TO - NO ONE IS FORCING YOU. THE STORY IS CLEARLY TAGGED, DON'T BE A JERK.
I sincerely hope that you continue writing this as it has a lot of potential - don't let the negative reviews get you down ;) (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
bhatia
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Mar 8, 2008 |
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Well written and exceptional!dying for the next chapters of the story..............fantastic job (8/10)
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- Replied by:
nakdsub
(Edit) (Mar 17, 2008)
- Thank you very much. I wasn't going to continue writing this because of the first few reviews, but, since some people do seem to like it, I will add to it.
Thanks again.
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| Reviewer:
joro
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Jan 8, 2008 |
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Well written and exceptional! I have been waiting a long time for a f/M nc humiliation story with a younger girl. So far this story has the turned me on as much or more than any story I have read on this site. I sincerely hope there will be more chapters to come... (10/10)
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- Replied by:
nakdsub
(Edit) (Jan 13, 2008)
- Thanks for the comments. There are more chapters coming, I hope you like them as much as you did the start.
Thanks again,
nakdsub
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| Reviewer:
Rocky
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Jan 5, 2008 |
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I'm generally not into f/M stories, but this one has piqued my interest. Yes, there wasn't much prelude to the blackmail and there are a few inconsistencies, but no more than many other stories on this and other sites. Yes, the police probably would have tracked the vehicle based on the description and partial license plate, but who is to say the police report isn't a forgery? After all, we're talking about a con artist here, aren't we? I'd like to see a more descriptive narrative, but will certainly be looking forward to future installments. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
schoolboylv
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Jan 5, 2008 |
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Nice start, I'll re-review once you add more.... (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
kinkcrazy
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Jan 4, 2008 |
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Well written and lots of potential (9/10)
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slaveneedledick
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Jan 4, 2008 |
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Very good start to a story that has potential. (6/10)
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chuck
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Jan 4, 2008 |
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It is well written with attention to detail and consistency. There are logic flaws, but they are almost inevitable in fantasies that are based on a non realistic premise.
As to the moral angle of the age, it is a fantasy and the story line does not lend itself to anyone trying to emulate a similar situation outside of imagination.
The dynamics of writing a fantasy based on the premise of submission to someone young (and therefore inexperienced) are challenging. Usually, it involves someone who is experienced to lead (or at least guide) the dominant or the young dominant is sophisticated beyond her years. Both options tend to dilute or negate the premise of submitting to innocence. So far, this story falls into the latter category.
Regardless, it is a good story and leaves room for expansion. I'm looking forward to future chapters.
(8/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 4, 2008 |
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the story to me reads like a childs book, to many things missing to listt hem all, but i find the story unrelaistic nobody will agree to things as fast as are in the story "Ok what do you want me to odo" thisi s not reality (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
trainmanretep
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Jan 4, 2008 |
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The rating is for content. I have a real problem with any underage content plus it is really not believable. Cops would be asking for parents, etc. The same blackmail scenario could have been set with a 18 or 19 year old. Writing skill is better then the rating indicates, maybe a 7 or 8 (1/10)
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- Replied by:
schoolboylv
(Edit) (Jan 5, 2008)
- So then you shouldn't read these types of stories if you don't like underage. I don't like MM but I don't go rate every MM story a 1. The author clearly states in his codes and summary that there is underage in this story....
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