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Smithereens
Author: Book of Evils
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(Added on Jan 29, 2008)
(This month 22434 readers) (Total 37549 readers) |
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I didn\'t have to go to dynamite school to learn that explosives and cunts are incompatible. Caveat for This story: Portions of this story are reserved for the truly depraved. The line between gratifying violence and gratuitous violence has probably been crossed and re-crossed. There are some exceptionally disgusting portions, even for B. of E. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
Mothbrad
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Feb 5, 2008 |
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It's always an exciting moment when a new Book of Evils story comes through the pipes, and this one is right up there with the rest of them. Honestly, it's hard for me to comment much more on these, except to say that if you like your villains horrible and your victims innocent and extremely unfortunate, these are the stories for you. Nothing even remotely safe, sane or consensual in any of these stories. It's taken me longer to read than usual, mostly because of external/life issues, but also, I think, because this story gets quite dense in parts, and needs a bit of concentration. More novel like, rather than the outright brutality/quick sick fix of some of the earlier stories. Breathless and patient at the same time.
(9/10)
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- Replied by:
Book of Evils
(Edit) (Feb 12, 2008)
- Hi Brad.
Sorry to take so long getting back to comment on your review. I've been away and just got to my PC. As always, thanks for the excellent review. I especially appreciated your observation about 'nothing even remotely safe, sane or consensual' That is the most specific, truest observation that any reviwer has made of all my works and in fear of repeating myself, you really get it. Hope your external life issues aren't too pressing but they do sound somewhat ominous. Didn't realize you'd posted a second chapter to your brilliant materpiece - Cell Mate. When I've had a chance to really absorb it, will review it.
Stay in touch and thanks again.
Regards
BofE
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| Reviewer:
DeGrinch
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Feb 5, 2008 |
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Very well written. But dam man this is evil. I loved it. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Book of Evils
(Edit) (Feb 5, 2008)
- Hello:
Thanks for the positive feedback and rating.
I would have to agree, wholeheartedly, this one was a bit over the top, even for my twisted imagination, hence the beginning caveat.
Glad you enjoyed.
I believe there's some other reasonably imaginative stuff in some of my other stories so have a look see if you have some time spared.
Regards
BofE
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susankarl
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Feb 3, 2008 |
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I like your play with your captive, the giving of false hope and the pleasure your nasty man takes from proving hope to be in vain.
Just because I am greedy, I thought it was a shame he did not collect her teenage daughters for a few games, too. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Book of Evils
(Edit) (Feb 3, 2008)
- Hello:
Good to hear from you again and thanks for the rating. If you'll take a look at my previous story, R. R.& R. you'll find a mom and two of her daughters being terrorized.
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