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The Lawyer
Author: Lady C
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(Added on Feb 11, 2008)
(This month 56351 readers) (Total 86827 readers) |
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When an unsuspecting lawyer is arrested by a policewoman, he gets more than he bargained for. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
xSoCalCynicx
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Jan 22, 2011 |
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You are a very good writer; you are adept with dialogue, and the story moves at a good steady pace; call me picky, but a rape coding is appropriate, given the turnabout about 1/3rd of the way through the story. A maybe-minor point; not to read too much into this fantasy, but I know cops, and given the type of personality that P.D.'s hire, no cop would willingly violate the P.D.'s rules of drawing his or her sidearm to further his or her role as a Dominant. Grace's character is weakened by her willingness to threaten the protagonist by her sidearm, as well as her knife. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
jrnd711
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Apr 29, 2008 |
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As good as you can find in this genre. A flowing, and erotic masterpiece. Aceith (10/10)
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- Replied by:
theladystouch
(Edit) (Apr 29, 2008)
- Thank you so much for your generous words.
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| Reviewer:
longrover
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Mar 30, 2008 |
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Very well done -- two good characters, good dialog and plot. It will be interesting to see how the transition to his knowing more about her works out. (9/10)
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slavesnake
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Mar 19, 2008 |
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The first story ever I did not peek to see how it would end. So well written, I allow myself to read on a chapter as a reward :). And I hope the sequel will never end, thank you....
Btw I still haven't finished it (10/10)
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- Replied by:
theladystouch
(Edit) (Mar 20, 2008)
- I'm delighted you are enjoying it. Thank you so much for taking the time to submit a review. I really appreciate it.
The Lady
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| Reviewer:
johnmacadam
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Mar 10, 2008 |
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Interesting, it went in a different direction than I was expecting. It leads like romantic d/s, and then the final few chapters(up to 9) diverge.
Although I have to say, this lawyer has by far too much time for the gym. Its all 18 hour days 7 days a week. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
theladystouch
(Edit) (Mar 11, 2008)
- You obviously didn't care much for the story. Would you care to offer suggestions that would have made it better for you? Thank you for taking the time to share your comments.
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| Reviewer:
CommieCowboy
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Mar 1, 2008 |
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If you're a novice, I'm a Tory. Great pacing, lots of suspense, and hot, hot, hot. I can read this right after getting off and still be steamed by it. :D (10/10)
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- Replied by:
theladystouch
(Edit) (Mar 2, 2008)
- Thanks so much for your review. This is, in fact, the first story of any sort I have tried to "publish". Although, I am pleased that you find the caliber of my work to be more than "novice" quality. Thank you so much for your kind words. I'm very glad you enjoyed it.
Lady C
P. S. More episodes will be coming soon. Cheers.
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| Reviewer:
VladPotemkin
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Feb 23, 2008 |
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Great story. Can't say I'm rooting for the protagonist to break free of his diabolical tormentor :) Somehow, I think William's torment will escalate... (10/10)
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- Replied by:
theladystouch
(Edit) (Feb 23, 2008)
- Don't worry. William doesn't stand a chance. ;)
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| Reviewer:
curiousgeek1
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Feb 22, 2008 |
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Love this series. Please continue it!!! I love how William is surprised and kidnapped. The bondage is great (although I would really like to see more of it), and I love the teasing and sensualness of the Mistress.
Just finished part 3, it was fantastic! There is something about being bound outdoors which makes one feel even more vulnerable. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
theladystouch
(Edit) (Feb 15, 2008)
- Thank you for your feedback. It is appreciated.
P. S. In upcoming chapters you might get your wish. :)
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| Reviewer:
slvWriting
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Feb 14, 2008 |
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Quite a debut on the Library. Impecable and very hot plot, good grammar and vocabulary well employed.
This story is hot and enjoyable, and one in which I'd love to incarnate the lawyer ;)
Hope to read other stories from you soon, as well as further parts on this one! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
theladystouch
(Edit) (Feb 15, 2008)
- Thank you very much for taking the time to provide feedback - especially to this novice writer. Look for more chapters on William shortly.
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| Reviewer:
timroberts1098
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Feb 12, 2008 |
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Very well written. Dialogue is excellent, a quality lacking in most stories here. The fantasy is not one I share, so the story doesn't do as much for me as it might for other readers. Nice work. Hope to see more from you. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
theladystouch
(Edit) (Mar 1, 2008)
- Thank you very much for the feedback. I appreciate the encouragement.
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